MY LIFE

MY LIFE

A Poem by mark
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Just a poem about my life lately and how much stress i have gone through :)

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Everything in my life lately 
Has been such a big mess.
So many things have gone wrong
Its really making me stress.

It's so hard for all this
To just fade away.
I'm hoping my luck will 
turn around someday.

I have been applying
For jobs for so long.
I never get called back,
What have i done wrong?

So many other things
Are turning out bad.
Me getting angry over it
Is making people mad.

It is so hard for me 
To deal with this.
Me being happy i
What i really miss.

I'm taking it out 
In such a bad way.
I just want to believe
That things will be OK.

Dealing with all this stress
Is really breaking me down.
It's making me so depressed,
It can only make me frown.

I now lost my license,
I can't drive my car.
Getting around by public
Is going to seem so far.

So much depression,
So much bad luck.
It's hard to be positive,
I think i'm really stuck.

I think in time i will 
Actually pull through.
I just need to believe that
This is something i can do.




© 2013 mark



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mark
please view and review :) i would like some feedback and i would like to hear what you thought about it. Thanks it will be much appreciated :)

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I can relate to the not getting a job thing. It took me 3 years to finally get a permanent job and now I'm out of work again because the shop has closed down! Life really sucks at times, but I think that every bad thing placed in our life is a lesson that we need to learn and also a test. I love how the last stanza was hopeful :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

yeah it sucks ive been looking for 2 years and i cant find anything. i actually got anxiety not long.. read more
adetailedflameofpurestjoy

4 Years Ago

Good luck with everything! You'll get through it eventually, it just takes time :)
mark

4 Years Ago

yep it certainly does take its time...years in fact and more to wait i think lol



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wow, I am so sorry, and I wish you the best, I get the depression though, and everything going wrong, but I think you indeed can pull through! I really do! (and you have a great girlfriend to be there for you!) this was a great write, though painfully real...

Posted 3 Years Ago


mark

3 Years Ago

thank you so much :) im not feeling like that much anymore i think things are turning around for me .. read more
Bowers

3 Years Ago

your very welcome, Im so glad things are going well!
mark

3 Years Ago

thanks :) its not too bad
I can relate to the not getting a job thing. It took me 3 years to finally get a permanent job and now I'm out of work again because the shop has closed down! Life really sucks at times, but I think that every bad thing placed in our life is a lesson that we need to learn and also a test. I love how the last stanza was hopeful :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

yeah it sucks ive been looking for 2 years and i cant find anything. i actually got anxiety not long.. read more
adetailedflameofpurestjoy

4 Years Ago

Good luck with everything! You'll get through it eventually, it just takes time :)
mark

4 Years Ago

yep it certainly does take its time...years in fact and more to wait i think lol
Damn this how I've been feeling for six months now. We're in the same boat. In time it will get better. For both of us.

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

far really? we had the same experience in those dreams and now life lol...wierd huh.
i believe.. read more
Yes, just keep believing in your last verse and it will turn around. I am sorry life sucks at the moment and I could feel your sadness and anger in this poem and that's quite understandable.
The rhyme and flow is really good here. Well done!
Write on!

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
im trying believe me i am getting worse now though its getting to me mor.. read more
I can totally see this being a spoken word piece.
Its easy to relate to and you can feel emotion seeping from it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

im glad u can relate to this
thanks for ur kind review :)
I really hope things will turn around for you soon :) Keep your head up.
Great write, I could totally feel your frustration.
:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

thank you anna. i hope they will soon too :) ill try
thank you so much.
im glad you en.. read more
annabellee

4 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
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Hey never give up kiddo, few years from now you'll read this and think how great things are...you've got your health and a sweet girl by your side, the rest will follow soon I'm sure :) x

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

awwww thank you so much raven.
its hard sometimes but your right i have the greatest girlfrie.. read more
NA

4 Years Ago

ur welcome hun :) x
You say you cant write about anything but me or love pfffft bullshit.
That is amazing babe see if you think of things in your life..... You can write about anything that's on your mind, because your letting your feelings and emotions out it works and it makes for the best poems when it comes from your heart.
I love it babe i think people will relate to it as well.
The rhyming scheme was great.
Makes people really feel what your feeling.

Life will get better babe, well i cant guarantee that but i doubt it can get worse, we both need to get some good luck sometime.
i love you i hope things start looking up for you :)
you can write about anything you want when you put your heart into it.
Amazing poem babe
kisses and hugs xxxxoooo


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

well i didn't think i could. but i was actually really thinking bout things then.
awwww thank .. read more

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