THE LITTLE GIRL

THE LITTLE GIRL

A Poem by mark
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A poem/short story about a girl who lost her parents at sea and were then rescued. Hope you all like it.

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The little girl was sitting lonely on the ground,
Crying because her parents haven't been found.
They were lost at sea during a very heavy storm,
With water ice cold, they struggled to keep warm.

The little girl was scared because it's been too long,
She is doing whatever she can to still stay strong.

The little girl was asking everyone
If they had seen her mum and dad.
Nobody could give her a real answer,
And suddenly they started to feel bad.

The little girl had no idea what to think,
Whether the boat was saved, or did it sink?
The little girl then went and sat by the shore,
She went to do this so she can cry some more.

The little girl looked out to sea,
With the view black as night.
The little girl then looked up 
And smiled with such delight.

The little girls parents were 
Then brought onto the sand.
The little girl then grabbed
Onto each one of their hand.

The little girls family walked off together.
The little girl was now more happy than ever.

© 2013 mark



Author's Note

mark
Please view and review.
I would like to see what everyone thinks of this.
Thank you.
enjoy :)

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Its great babe another great write about something other then love.
Very creative thought to write about something like this its different.
I think it was great you know i love it your getting even better as a writer and im so impressed by your work, and the things your coming up with.
I love you so much mwa xxxooo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

Thank you sweetheart :)
I know i dont know how i came up with it, it was just a random idea la.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Years Ago

yer i think you could write about something like that easy that would be great :)
i love you .. read more
mark

4 Years Ago

thanks babe :)



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I like this sad at the beginning with happy ending! Very sweet! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


mark

3 Years Ago

thank you :)
Awwwhhh! What a sweet poem! I was so sad at first , im so happy it had a turn around for the ending. Great rhyming in this poem and flowed so well! Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


mark

3 Years Ago

thanks im glad you liked it :) yeah i had to put a happy ending in it :) thanks for reading and revi.. read more
awwh, I love this, I like the transition from it being sad to ending really happy :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
I'm glad you like it :)
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awww such a sweet tale....the picture really grabs at your heart too, great job! really enjoyed :) x

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it :)
Thank you so much :)
I liked the feel of this piece. Almost like a fable that one would read to children before bed. It has many lovely qualities and I like the simplicity of it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

thanks very much :)
good poem, I liked the story you told here, very touching and heartfelt. It made me feel really sorry for that little girl but I'm glad it ended well.
Great write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


annabellee

4 Years Ago

not at all, she was right about it :)
you're most welcome :)
mark

4 Years Ago

awww thank you :)
annabellee

4 Years Ago

you're most welcome, again :)
Its great babe another great write about something other then love.
Very creative thought to write about something like this its different.
I think it was great you know i love it your getting even better as a writer and im so impressed by your work, and the things your coming up with.
I love you so much mwa xxxooo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

Thank you sweetheart :)
I know i dont know how i came up with it, it was just a random idea la.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

4 Years Ago

yer i think you could write about something like that easy that would be great :)
i love you .. read more
mark

4 Years Ago

thanks babe :)

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hey i'm mark. I am a really friendly person I get along with almost anybody. I have an amazing girlfriend that I love so much, I never want to lose her. I have just started getting into writing poems... more..

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