I PROMISE TO BE BETTER

I PROMISE TO BE BETTER

A Poem by mark
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A story/poem i wrote to my girlfriend about how i am feeling and how i will be :)

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I love the way you kiss me each day and night.
I just really miss it when we never used to fight.
I hate the way i have treated you and i'm so sorry.
I feel like you're going to give up on me, 
And that makes me worry.

I shouldn't be taking my stress out on you i know.
I am hurt for what i have done and it definitely shows.

I have to put a smile on your face and make you happy more.
When you are, you see our future, and that's when you're sure.
I am going to try and be happy with you allot.
I will try and do this whether i'm with you or not.

I just have so much that's on my mind.
Getting myself a job is so hard to find.
My life seems to be going downhill, and its a big scare.
It just means so much how you're always there.

It hurts more when you're not near.
I know i don't really show it,
But i feel better when you're here.

You are so amazing, but sometimes i don't see.
This is why you deserve so much better than me.
I'm going to be better, this i promise to do,
Because what i do to you just isn't fair.
It's definitely not the way i like to treat you.

Thank you for being there for me every night.
I can't believe you still care even after we fight.
You are going to see the better me more,
It will make us very happy, that's for sure.

I love you more than anything sweetheart.
I'm going to try and be more happy when we're apart.
I want to be a better boyfriend to you,
Because that's who you fell in love with at the start.



© 2013 mark



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This is a very heart-felt and emotional poem. As human beings, none of us are perfect, but sometimes we just need another person to make us believe that we are.

Posted 3 Years Ago


mark

3 Years Ago

thanks for your kind words. im glad u liked it :)
What a great and loving poem ! Im sure your girlfriend loved it !

Posted 3 Years Ago


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mark

3 Years Ago

thank you so much :) she did it put a smile on her face :)
This is a very good poem, Mark. Emotional and straight from your heart like all your poems.
Very sweet.
Well done :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

thank you so much anna :)
i appreciate it :)
annabellee

4 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
Its a great poem hun as are all of your poems.
Its sweet and brings out all your emotions and lets me know how your feeling.
Thanks for this poem its sweet :) Very romantic :)
Im glad to here your going to try thank you.
Touches me when you write things like this :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

awww thanks sweetheart :) i will try :)
i love you xxxooo

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hey i'm mark. I am a really friendly person I get along with almost anybody. I have an amazing girlfriend that I love so much, I never want to lose her. I have just started getting into writing poems... more..

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