Sapna

Baatoon se nikalti rahe naiye baatein

Phir wohi baatein leke 

Geet koi main likhu

Jo sab ke dil ko chu le

Main chala ja raha hu jis aur

Teri jarurat hai mujhe uss moad

Baatoon baatoon mein kar bethein mulakate

Dhundha tha jo tujhe haar gali

Bass kaffi hai ki tu mujhe mili

Aab khushi Khushi se katey ye din

Chehre pe le ke pyaari si haasi

Sochu jo tujhe aankhee band karke

Lage ki mil gaya mera jahaan

Hogayi tu jo meri

Ye soch ek leher ki tarah lage

Jisme main behta jaau

Neend na khule meri

Sapana na tutte

Ye khwaish leke chalta jau mein.

Reviews

[Sandipta$]

Drms r better than reality.....

[It Will Change]

Yes as there are no limitations and freedom to live life as we wish :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

very innocent and lovable...nicely penned :)

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

PRETTTYYYY!!!......soo cute..and adorable

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Ayush Mishra]

woow..thats amazing...a bit different concept...I wish for dreams to come true :)

[It Will Change]

haha thank you :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah.....beautifully written.Bas kaafi hai ki tu mujhe mili.....is my most favourite line it says a lot.

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Zoya]

A beautiful 'sapna', indeed! Magnificent poetry...loved it.

[It Will Change]

Thank you Zoe :D

[Manasa.L]

Bahut accchi hai. Hum bhi duwa mangenge ki yeah sapna aapka tutte nahi. Good writing.:)

[It Will Change]

haha jarur mangna ;p Thank you :)

[APOORVA]

bahot khoob, kya baat hai :)

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Surya]

Bahut acha hai, kaafi hai ye baatein..!!..That's good, I enjoyed last few lines much as well your poem too..:)

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Mr.Writer]

I tried my best to read it from my past hindi/urdu experience and it quite worked! It was a love story :) It was really really good! My favourite lines were...
"Bass kaffi hai ki tu mujhe mili
Aab khushi Khushi se katey ye din"
I likes these line alot!
Keep it up! :)

[It Will Change]

haha...Thank you thank you :D

[Mr.Writer]

No problem!