"Black Fire"

"Black Fire"

A Poem by Valentine

         "Black Fire"
The sun rises...and welcomes a brand new day.
Day and night separate...and lets dreams lay.
Awaiting the sunset, when light and dark embrace;
Black caressing the moon, like a lover's face.

The sun, a fire that night only can quench the flames.
Night embraces the moon, over...once again.
Man touches woman...in the darkness of the night;
Separating at sunrise...in the morning light.

She is the fire...the light of each sun rise;
He the black of night, leaving moonlight in the eyes.
One has the power, to quench the others flame...
The other the strength...to reflect the light again.

Sunrise...when light and dark...separate;
Sunset, when light and dark...meet...and embrace.

             Valentine

© 2015 Valentine


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embrace the night with a little candle light may it sweeten the pot of love between two remembering the love we had between me and you. God's Blessing too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

This was about natures light and darkness. Kathie
I would have liked to have one single sunrise and sunset depicted Kathie to encapsulate the poem - I found the 'is it night, is it day?' interrupted the flow somewhat. In saying that I really liked the 'separation' idea of night and day and dreams laying until next time.
i also really liked this -
"She is the fire...the light of each sun rise;
He the black of night, leaving moonlight in the eyes.
One has the power, to quench the others flame...
The other the strength...to reflect the light again." - its wonderful writing I felt.
Thanks for sharing this one Kathie.
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and your helpful comments. Kathie
I enjoyed the poem. Your description create good vision and place.
"Sunrise...when light and dark...separate;
Sunset, when light and dark...meet...and embrace."
A outstanding poem dear Poet.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine has a fine feeling for balanced verses. Fine write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie for stopping by. Kathie
Your words are beautifully soft and gentle, but more than that, I love the feeling your words left me with - a feeling of serenity. So lovely Kathie!

:) Julie

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you Julie. Kathie
a really great poem Kathie, first stanza is beautiful:

'Awaiting the sunset, when light and dark embrace;
Black caressing the moon, like a lover's face.'

Wonderful lines, every stanza is a true work of poetry, straight in my library :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Whew Richard you flatter me. Turning a bit pink. Thank you for your review, Kathie
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I like the great descriptions here. The poem reads smoothly and the reader is left with a soft and gentle love feeling. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. Kathie
Profoundly beautiful and sensual, these reflections of dark and light dancing just set the imagination to flames. This just all flows so perfectly into the mystery of love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you. So nice to see you again. Kathie
This was very smooth Valentine and the comparisons of the sun, moon, she, and he. Well written, I enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for sharing this with me.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

You are more than welcome. Kathie
This is beautiful and brilliant layout, "black caressing the moon, like a lover's face" I just love this, such great imagery it creates! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Heard someone talking, and let the comment grow. Pays to have a notebook and pencil always handy. .. read more
sereenaoutloud

8 Years Ago

That is so cool. Yes i always have my notebook and pencil with sharpener (i do not like writing in .. read more

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