"God's Flower Garden"

        "God's Flower Garden"

                           A Poem by Valentine

 

 

I wrote this in memory of the baby I lost on Christmas Eve When I was 36 years old...I pray one day to see "you" in heaven.... your mommy!                "God's Flower Garden"   The hills and valleys are filled with flowers. God's little ones come and play for hours. Blessed children, that were called too soon home, Have a grand playground, to call their own. Every child...that was loved and lost, Has a precious "Father", that paid life's cost. To bring them Home to this glorious place... Where laughter and smiles are upon each face, Heaven is the guaranteed promised end; From earth's cruel dirt, each baby to send. Every lost child, before "the age of consent," Is promised this playground, and are Heaven bent. Please...no longer weep mom...for you see, I am as happy as,...any child can be. Among the flowers...I romp and play, Along with my Father, throughout each single day. Red, yellow, black  or just plain white... We are ...we play here...mixed with the blooms, Come soon to see us...among God's flowers...there is room! Mom and dad, do not cry, and please do not weep. In a valley of beautiful flowers, we play and we sleep. Patiently waiting, until God calls to you; In these beautiful flowers...God longs...for parents too!   Written by Valentine

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

This is amazingly soul felt and yes they will have Angels to play and commune with God is good you inspired me to write a poem titled "For Valentine" just released this morning my tribute for the loss of your baby may God bless and comfort you

[Valentine]

It has been years, and life goes on. Kathie

[W R Stowe]

Life goes on but they are always remembered especially on holidays and birthdays stay strong

[Woody]

I can only imagine the excruciating pain a mum feels when her baby is called by God. I know it's been some time but I'm sorry for your loss, Kathie.
this is probably the best reaction to make the pain bearable. knowing that the little one is in better place and the time will come when he/she will be reunited with his/her mum for eternity.

[Valentine]

Thank you for your kind words. Kathie

[R Smith]

a beautiful poem Kathie, so perfect for the memory of your lost child, we know the children will be well looked after in heaven and will grow in wisdom while they play amid the flowers until we come to be with them :)

[Valentine]

Yes, and I believe that. Kathie

[Lizardo]

Valentine, I'm very sorry for your lost....
This poem has a lot of emotions in it, but a grat imagination too. But I'm very sorry for your lost, I do hope that now your at least a little better. But like you say in your poem, God has a place of us all, and when we go to heaven, we'll meet again with the one who we lost.
Great poem Valentine, touched my heart.

[Valentine]

This was some time ago, but thank you. Kathie

[andrew mitchell]

very sad Valentine a sad poem that leaves you overcome by sorrow. I look at my kids and couldn't imagine your tragic loss you must have suffered.

[Valentine]

Yes, and learning there was no chance to try again after an operation to make it possible to even try. Kathie

[ANTO]

Aw God - Kathie - I almost didnt make it past the preamble at the start my dear , dear friend.
You penned a beautifully moving piece if poetry and I felt close to you when I read it. My sympathies - I was not aware of the extent of your loss in your life. You are a true role model for me now - I only pray that I could ever emulate your courage and strength in the face of such pain. God Love you and God rest your loved ones who you write about. (hug)

[Valentine]

Yes, waking up on Christmas to learn that I had lost the baby was one of the worse things I ever had to face. It was my only pregnancy and I could not have children after that. Merry Christmas huh. Kathie

[ANTO]

Wow - Im so sorry you had to experience that my friend. My heart goes out to you - truly...

[wordman]

a beautiful and touching write
there's a place in heaven only children can

[Valentine]

Thank you Ron. Kathie

[~]

Ohh dear.. I am so sorry.. I don't think my words will do justice to this piece. I command you for your strong Faith, that I am sure has been sustaining you... similar situation happened to my sister .. and we know we will see the baby boy in heaven.. wounds that will not stop leaking till we enter heaven's realm.

[Valentine]

Thank you for your kind review. Kathie

[Jamestown]

Another great flowing write, wonderful sentiment!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Thank you for reading my write' Kathie

[KWP]

Beautiful sentiment and gorgeous words - love is more than abounding and can travel to every corner of the universe if we wish it to.

A really lovely write XX