"Wings"

"Wings"

A Poem by Valentine

      "Wings"


If love had wings

It would fly

To your door;

Seeking entrance...

To offer itself

And so much more.

It would

Shyly knock...

Take one look

At your face,

Offer itself...

To all old fears

And tears

Finally erase.

If love

Had wings,

It would come...

Straight to you,

Climb into

Your heart...

And stay...

All life through.

If only love had wings! 


 Valentine

© 2015 Valentine


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that is beautiful Kathie, i believe it would make a lovely song, could be so romantic :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Like this a lot, here you use another kind of structure, this worls well, the short lines give this a lot of energy, this speeds up the reading, and makes this very accessible, fine poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie for taking the time to read this. Kathie
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Sometimes, we do reach out with our love even though we feel that we can't. Keep sprinkling your love :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Just a poem, no love "sprinkling." ??????? Kathie
love is one of the most beautiful feelings in the world and adding wings to it to make it soar is interesting... good job Valentine :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing this. Kathie
Wings to expand and find love. Would be a wonderful thing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my dear friend.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading this write. Kathie
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I liked the poem. I like the hope and drive in this poem and you are welcome my friend.
I love the short lines and the sing-song rhyme. A sweet little gem Kathie!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is a lovely thought from the heart - a longing
Its a different style for you here Kathie and you make it work. The short lines give it something - a kind of wishful sincerity that carries the reader along.
Most enjoyable and feel you called on your painting and other skills to creat a piece of art poetry.
Thank you for the RR my friend
:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words..Kathie
Very simple, yet thought-provoking! I enjoyed it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Happy that you enjoyed it. Kathie
AAHH!.....
If only love had........ :D
A very lovely poem by a very lovely person...
Love it....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you sweetie. Kathie
if love had wings we could fly away,to a special place where we could always stay

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Wouldn't we all...if only...Kathie

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