Thoughts

Thoughts

A Poem by Valentine

                Thoughts

Never thought the day would come;
  That I would want to bolt and run.

    But...that day is finally here...
     And my heart is full of fear.

        Who will welcome me,
                    when,
                I get there?



                  Valentine

© 2017 Valentine



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very powerful write here, I enjoyed this

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Thank you kindly. Kathie
Some people go through life unscathed. Some just get the world thrown at them. I don't know how much faith one should possess. It would seem a bloody lot to me.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Paul, this was me returning home to family years later only so many here have moved on or passed awa.. read more
Paul Bell

8 Months Ago

Afraid not Kathie, Life.
A short but powerful poem. Your poems have a special place in my heart :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words Sweetie. Kathie
the ones that left before you !

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

Ron, I was thinking more of returning home and finding so many loved ones moved on with their lives .. read more
A little too short and vague. Almost seems to be a woman that has been in a bad relationship for years and finally decides to end it but is very fearful of doing so as she doesn't quite know what is going to happen or what she should do next.

At least that is my humble interpretation. Let me know if I am mistaken or not.

Still, this poem made me think...

So, I therefore think that it is a fairly good poem despite what I mentioned earlier. :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Valentine

8 Months Ago

When the day comes that parents, siblings, a child, and your spouse have died, left all alone, and y.. read more
Lovecraft

8 Months Ago

Honestly, I would turn to nihilism.

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