"Seeking Entrance"

  "Seeking Entrance"

 

Where were you...

the nights I cried.

When empty passion

whithered and died.

 

Now you knock...

asking to come in;

forgetting alll of the places

that you have been.

 

I cried so long...

no one came to call.

Now you seek entrance,

to my heart and all.

 

Do I know you?

 

I search my memory

and soon find...

I forgot you exist,

with love's new kiss.

 

Valentine

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Great Write has lots of meaning for lost love.

[sereenaoutloud]

This started of sad feeling the loss of a loved one but ending on a positive note,,,the chance of love again!

[R Smith]

strong poem Kathie, much to be sad about but ending with love's new kiss takes away the previous pain :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem. Hard when we reflex on things.
"I search my memory
and soon find...
I forgot you exist,
with love's new kiss."
You left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear friend.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Only you will know when it's time to move on...
oh but the excitement of love's new kiss!!

:) Julie

[Valentine]

Old poem Julie, at my age moving is slow.....Kathie

[Krystal Nicole]

a great poem about moving on! great piece!

[andrew mitchell]

A sweet write like a refresh button pressed on life

[Valentine]

Andrew, an old write, up where I am living since I sold my home it is mostly distant relatives. Not thinking of a companion any time soon. Kathie

[wordman]

yeah you get tired of this stuff and know it`s time to move on

[Valentine]

Ron, this was an older poem, nothing to do with me. Today it is 2 years since I lost him. For a while time stood still, now it seems to fly by. Hope you are well. I am a little better. Kathie

[wordman]

good to see you writing

[Valentine]

This was an older poem. This virus knocked the heck out of my sister's family and me. Slowly waking up. Stay well. Kathie

[wordman]

i know it`s rough,and it spreads through every body in the house

[Perkele.7885]

Kathie, was that someone that you new before Woody?

[Valentine]

Raj. Who in the heck is "Woody"? My husband's name was Lee York. His dad was 1st cousin to Sgt. Alvin C. York the famous soldier they made the movie about> KATHIE

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes, it's time to move on and enjoy the feel of a new kiss, a new love as you express in your poem! We must ask if we even know one who is rarely even aware we are alive! Another nice write my friend!!