Between silences

What I felt.

You intrigue me.
Its the first time we've met
Your eyes are all I want to see
Your voice is one that I'll never forget

Between silences 
I look into your eyes 
Between silences 
I forget all your sweet lies

I kiss those sweet lips 
I admire the way they curve with mine as I smile 
My heart begins to skip
This kiss lasts a long while

Between breaths 
I blush and try to think 
Between breaths 
My brain starts to sink 

Your body molds to mine
Your short breaths are like music to my ears
You send chills up my spine
My mind is full of cheer. 

Between dreams
I wake up to see if you are real 
Between dreams 
I wonder if you feel what I feel. 

Author's Note

Ignore any grammar problems please

Reviews

[Sunny Skye]

Beautiful love poem. I really enjoyed it. Good job.

-SkyeBlanco

[Disillusioned]

A beautiful and simple expression, softness from the strength of hope.

[Corinne]

Very free flowing and light...yet passionate. Beautiful.

[JanieB]

I really like this. Well done.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the repetitiveness in this poem and my favorite stanza is the last one. I think we all wonder at some point do they feel the way I do.

[Alicia™]

Aww, this is sweet. I agree with Coyote: this poem is gentle, too...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer. The poem was gentle and sweet. Love always make us afraid to be alone again. When drowning in passion and love. We are afraid that the love maybe a dream only. A very good ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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a tender and wishful write..delicate and soft...loved it

[Kesha]

Wow. Wonderful absolutely amazing! I liked the imagery here :)

[Terra]

Nice work.Very tender.I like it.