A Barista's Haiku

A Barista's Haiku

A Poem by Attentive_Ambience
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For my time employed as the little barista girl that handled legal drug deals.

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Espresso you fine
on a dime cannot deny
that I'm satisfied


Steam me up, Pour me
Adore all my froth and foam
I'll be your last drop


Hate to say goodbye
Inevitably time passed
God F*****g Damn-it

© 2018 Attentive_Ambience



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Interesting to have 3 haikus which between them tell more than one sometimes is able. I might try this approach. There's some challenging word craft in here - inevitably, for heaven's sake!!! However, you've gone one syllable too far on that line - easy fix would be 'passed' instead of 'passes'

Posted 3 Months Ago


Attentive_Ambience

3 Months Ago

This is why it's good to have a second set of eyes read your work. Thank you again for pointing that.. read more

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Added on February 2, 2018
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Tags: haiku, modern, barista, caffeine, coffee, poetry, poem