Drama

Drama

A Poem by Vick Thomason

That feeling you get when you argue

That feeling you get when you are breaking up

That feeling you get when you threaten death

That feeling you get is known as drama

It makes thing's difficult

It makes things harder

It makes things complicated

It doesn't do a damn thing for me

I dont feel it

I dont want it

I dont care for it

When i hear that someone is angry

I say boo hoo and to just chill out

When i hear that someone has just broken up

I say move on and feel better

When i hear that someone hate's me

I shrug and say oh well

Your drama will not effect me

No matter how hard you try to get me

So if you try to get me into your drag

All i can say is, well thats just to damn bad

© 2009 Vick Thomason


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I think the last two lines are your best, because they seem a little less...self-conscious. A lot of this poem tries to be sort of formal, in its sentence structure and its overall style, but I think when it really shines is where you're less formal, where you write as you might speak, and where you sort of let loose and chill. This is partly something you gain over time, but it's also something that could be helped by reading aloud what you write when and after you write it. Does it flow? Does it sound natural?

Maybe you were going for a more formal approach -- but I think the slightly more natural one works wonders for you.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Vick Thomason
Vick Thomason

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