Downfall of Dishonest Daft People

Downfall of Dishonest Daft People

A Poem by Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)

Dishonest daft people of immaculate image imagine,
nobody would spot the stains on their heart.
When they are suspected they glib and survive,
thinking that troubles easily depart.

They seek lucrative friends for themselves
and win those friends by being gentle
who are daft for they are oblivious
that someone will turn out detrimental.

Once people spot stains of dishonesty-
a stain as dark as gloom or coal
then their immaculate image is wretched
and they seem dumb, as if a gaming console.

Then, common people start tormenting them
and demand their arrest,
their real-selves are exposed,
and media does the rest.

© 2016 Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)


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Dear Vassal Rohilla,

This is a really interesting poem.
Very good writing and usage of vocabulary.
I relate to this poem so much currently. Good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review. Nice user name, by the way.
true.....really nice poem and a very strong topic

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, friend.
Nicely penned..the image of dishonesty..keep up..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review.
Randhir kaur

8 Years Ago

Mention not..

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Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)
Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)

Dehradun, Uttrakhand, India



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I am Vatsal Rohilla and my place of residence is Dehradun, India. I adore flipping through the pages of books and incommoding the nib of my pen. more..

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