don't trust the sun

I'm sorry for possible grammar mistakes - I'm not English.

and she touched the star

and she burned

she believed that the sun is wonderful

giving hope, joy and happiness

in the end it just reflected that, right?

however, the truth turned out to be different

and the sun was bigger than her home planet

and she burned, falling into it

because she trusted the sun

and it betrayed her

just like all people on Earth.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems please, I'm not English :).
I'm still studying this laungage!

Reviews

[Silvan]

short, but great with subject matter.