Haiku-Hear Me

Haiku-Hear Me

A Poem by ~VertoAtrum~
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Missing an old friend very much.

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One day soon, I hope,

You might hear my thoughts of you,

Crying all your tears

© 2013 ~VertoAtrum~


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I like this one better than the last haiku!! So great to me due to the words you decided to use and I'm rambling now but I like it!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful haiku straight from the heart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on October 4, 2013
Last Updated on October 4, 2013
Tags: friend, dr sad, missing, upset, crying, hear, listen, haiku

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~VertoAtrum~
~VertoAtrum~

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