Impetus

Impetus

A Poem by ~VertoAtrum~
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Sometimes certain times of night will bring my romantic side to life, and I guess tonight was one of those times.

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Take my breath away, leave it screaming silently,
Pull the sheets over my world so that I cannot see,
Warm my blood, make it boil, make it burn,
I’m pinned helplessly, but now it’s my turn,
Feel my body move on top of yours, forcing you down,
Let me steal your lips so that you can’t make a sound,
Our breathing is in sync, out of time, our eyes are shining,
Overwhelming, all of it, this feeling is so exciting,
Our exhales are sharp as our grips tighten upon skin,  
We catch each others flaming eyes as we both grin,
Off our brows and down our necks flow sweat and heat,
Let your lips part too, so that our tongues may meet,
Thrash them around each other like angry serpents,
Or twist them gently together like a river and it’s currents,
Who cares if its wrong, the way it feels is more than right,
Happy, our souls, they dance together, what a great sight

© 2010 ~VertoAtrum~


Author's Note

~VertoAtrum~
I didn't know if I should have just put this under "Romance" instead, but now that I read it twice, it seems like the category it's in now fits it better hahaha

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Well done VertoAtrum I like how you use this topic in this poem if I could I would give you a gold star but I but I can not sadly an less you give me you address which would be so weird and I do not encourage such behaviour because it is rather dangers and yes you don't know me at all so year. I like your poem. thank you for sharing it with us.


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Well done VertoAtrum I like how you use this topic in this poem if I could I would give you a gold star but I but I can not sadly an less you give me you address which would be so weird and I do not encourage such behaviour because it is rather dangers and yes you don't know me at all so year. I like your poem. thank you for sharing it with us.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 8, 2010
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Tags: lust, love, passion, sexy, intense

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