i Believe in Dreams

Just some thoughts.....

words flow

songs ring

I believe in dreams.

 

family laughs

angels sing

I believe in dreams

 

death strikes

hope streams

I believe in dreams

 

depression kills

demons reign

I believe in dreams

 

soaring high

above grief

I believe in dreams

Author's Note

Honest opinion on rhetoric and content is appreciated.

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

Very elegant and short. It gets right to the point. It's very inspiring. I don't have any suggestions on how you could improve on this beautiful writing.

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So simple, yet so strong and inspiring.
Excellent piece, excellent read.

[NyanMeow]

Dreams...they are a source of so much hope, even when all else can seem lost. I love this.

[Arabdha]

hopeful..inspiring..and something to live your life by.."I believe in dreams"..a beautiful thought and a beautiful poem :)