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Dancing in the rain

Dancing in the rain

A Poem by Victoria Lee~

I will never play in the "gutter" with you

even as your angry words rain down on me

I will never let you pull me down with you

So let it rain



You can't hurt me anymore

I am free of you and your never ending cycle of drama and need

So let your words rain down on me

Let the lightning strike

Let the thunder roar



You will never win a war that only exists in your mind

I hope you see someday that you are really angry with yourself

Till then, let it rain down

let it rain down, rain down on me



I will always dance in the rain

I will dance in your rain

let it rain let it rain let it rain

down on me



Let the lightning strike

let the thunder roar

I will be dancing in your storm

free of you

dancing, dancing, dancing

in the rain

I will always be dancing in the rain

 

© 2008 Victoria Lee~


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That freedom is the best feeling in the world!
I work in a shelter for abused women and children
this write caught my attention.



Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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You have made a stand here, Victoria. I agree with your stance not to "lower" yourself to this person's level. It never pays. Another incredible write! Well done! Carole

Posted 15 Years Ago


whoah, your poem is wonderful!
It flows and makes sense and everything!
The picture and sound affects are awesome too!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful and melodic piece. I love the power in your words and the wonderful sense of freedom. Dancing in the rain is wonderful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is awesome! What a great way to handle someone who is always angry...they can be a real downer in life,
but if we simply just go with the storm...we create our own sunshine....really great piece :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this shows strength and courage -- i love it --
great writing -- and that picture is freaking awesome...
i love watching lightening storms -



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victoria, freedom of these kind of situations can be so elating. When you have someone who is so angry all the time, it does become an
explosive situation. This is a great line,
You will never win a war that only exists in your mind
I hope you see someday that you are really angry with yourself.
You can't hurt me anymore
I am free of you and your never ending cycle of drama and need
You said it perfectly and expressed this message so well in this piece.
Great job!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a stunning piece. Everything about it is amazing. Music pic and words. Great


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lot of strength in these words.

I loved the music in the title.
Fantastic picture too.

This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed every bit of it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

absolutely love this poem....I have left all those angry negative people in my dust...my life changed as i surround myself with positive thinking people...their anger is their issue they need to look inside themselves for the answer..for life goes on ...this is a powerful write and shows what a strong woman you truly are..bravo my love

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is really breathtaking, and it leaves the reader with a
sense of added knowledge, you deliver a perspective that is
of quality charactor, showing a brilliant self control, purely
passionate surrender of heart, sweeping imagery, love the
metaphor of turning a bad situation into a positive outlook,
that s uplifting, thank you for sharing your talent, much peace, mike

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Victoria Lee~
Victoria Lee~

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