rember

I remeber that night.

it was cold, not yet december.

leaves flew around us.

scattered by the wind.

You had your arms around me

snuggled up to you, as close as i could be.

that night i discovered.

would love you forever.

i didn't know it then.

the best friend and lover i ever had.

I remeber laying on my bed,

i snuggled next to you.

you tried to kidd me

i laughedd at you.

nerves took over. got the best of me

made a fool out of you.

Im blessed for your patience

and i hope that maybe, once again we can be.

Reviews

[George Love]

I'd like to suggest fixing the spelling in this work. I like the poem, but the spelling errors hurt it.