Woolgatherer

This is just went inside me while, I was thinking...

Stay with me,

I want you here - Don't go away

As I rest on you my love,

Just last night unitedly,

Hold on - I'll be there for some dreams we apportioned.

It’s mooching your feel; you’re firm hold over me.

Some osculates on my lips,

I sensed you on my fingers & tip's

I adhere inside your soul

You stay, or else I’ll fall

Erstwhile we lost our bind

Love took us closer & then we call

You say, we play, we stuck whole night long

Those touches; those feelings.

I'm afraid we won't be able to tease apart.

Felt your breathe

It was so sweet (like marshmallows), I lost my whole heart

Over again - once again to you my love.

Author's Note

Love you more than anyone my love.

Reviews

[Ardra]

Felt your breathe
It was so sweet (like marshmallows), I lost my whole heart
Over again - once again to you my love.

its like a song....beautifully done with so much tender emotions on display

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thats so beautifully woven by you
The exact feelings a girl has
to be in arms of someone who is genuine and true....
So that she could definitely stay and dont go away!

feeling lovely :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you dearie, Appreciate your feedback :)

[Red Rose]

This is beautiful.. And it's actually a coincidence because last night I had a dream.. I dreamt exactly what your poem says.
Great work! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much dear :).

Hope, it wasn't awful ;)

Anyways thank you again :)

[Red Rose]

Ur welcome..
It wasn't.. It was wonderful..
But when I woke up, then it was awful.

[Vikrantsingh]

Hopefully, I wish you have a good dream tonight ;).

[Red Rose]

Me too.. But I dnt mind nightmares. It's one of the best feeling ever to wake up and realize it wasn't real.

[Vikrantsingh]

Ah! I'm not a nightmare guy!! No no.. well thank you!!

[Mark]

Unique wording in this touching love poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Such a sweet product of thinking. Your muse didn't fail you in this one.
Thank you for sharing.

[Ruth]

So beautifully delivered and presented, a pleasure to read your words today hon :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Poopy:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Seductive and dreamy. Very romantic. Lydi**

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Lydi :)

[Saddam]

Hold on - I'll be there for some dreams we apportioned.
It’s mooching your feel; you’re firm hold over me.

Lovely.......... Great read dear friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Ta - I'm pleased to have your comments on my poetry.

Well lately I don't have much time to write :)

Long long time..

- Cheers!

[Saddam]

Keep writing friend, You are good.

[Zahin]

I love how you used the word "erstwhile".

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks a lot dear :)