Foresthide, Bridge To Cross (Crossed)

Foresthide, Bridge To Cross (Crossed)

A Poem by V. P. Trujillo
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Water underneath the bridge, overhead lamps heat me up, and across?

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Getting bolder, I feel your warmth, slowly stripping me of my isolated cold. Taking me back, and I am here in the sun. Not alone, no more. Never I was; ever I am, yours. 

© 2014 V. P. Trujillo


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V. P. Trujillo

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This felt like the perfect opponent, as almost a magnet force that brings the best in one and another above... I enjoyed reading this, as well the wonderful music. I saw a bridge too lately, Strewn with moss all over it, almost too beautiful to cross.... nice penning.

Zilla

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

V. P. Trujillo

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Zilla. I am glad to hear it.
Zilla Z.

9 Years Ago

You are more than welcome Vince. This is a bridge to cross. ;)



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This is interesting. What is it about exactly?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cecile Wonder

9 Years Ago

nothing bad happened right? I'm sorry if you lost this person.
V. P. Trujillo

9 Years Ago

Nothing bad, only good. I lost no one. x)
Cecile Wonder

9 Years Ago

That's good. I would hate for you to lose someone you to lose someone you love. I know that feeling .. read more
Your poem is deeply moving and beautifully inked. Very nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

V. P. Trujillo

9 Years Ago

It is a short one, which minus my latest has been all I have really done recently. Though I do not h.. read more
This felt like the perfect opponent, as almost a magnet force that brings the best in one and another above... I enjoyed reading this, as well the wonderful music. I saw a bridge too lately, Strewn with moss all over it, almost too beautiful to cross.... nice penning.

Zilla

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

V. P. Trujillo

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Zilla. I am glad to hear it.
Zilla Z.

9 Years Ago

You are more than welcome Vince. This is a bridge to cross. ;)
You get in life what you have the courage to ask for, and I see a bridge, I want to cross as well.. Time will be proper. Nothing makes me feel as good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 1, 2014
Last Updated on June 16, 2014
Tags: Forest, Green, Deep, Inside, Felt, Bridge, Walk, Across, Prepare, See, View, Knew, Know, Feelings, Isolate, Warming, Come, Together, Two

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V. P. Trujillo
V. P. Trujillo

San Jose, CA



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