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I whisper to the darkness, 

and close my eyes to sleep. 

In my dreams you hunt me, 

and waking makes me weep. 

Reviews

[terry smith]

Beautiful!!OH to have a gps in dreamland!!

[Devesh]

I whisper to my being,
"Go back to sleep"
Yet sleep refuses to come,
and take me in her keep.

My take on your words. Hope you don't mind, enjoyed reading it a lot. Thanks for sharing! :)

[Dewella~Vintella]

I dont mind at all ^^ thanks for doping by I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Devesh]

You're most welcome! :)

[A. Amos]

Brilliant piece my friend your work is well understood

[Chris]

Emotion-full and rhythmic...

[Sami Khalil]

Splendid...:)..........................

[Caradoc]

Ooo... How enticing.

-Cara

[Dewella~Vintella]

Thanks ^^ Just a little something that came into my head after finishing Shadows.

[Caradoc]

This makes me want to go to sleep and hunt someone in my dreams. Ah, if only I could do so, and pull that someone back into the waking world once I caught them.

[Caradoc]

Read this one again. It's so short, but it's got some "want" in it. You always were great at writing poems about dark desire.