Echoes

Sweet slow achingly tender
his voice echoes inside me

Throbbing words undulating
as he reads me his latest work

I am covering myself in poetry

I let his words drip
onto my body like cum
and I beg to lick up
every last little word

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

Just inspired by Steve who read me the poem he just wrote it was awesome I hope he shares it here

Reviews

[lyss]

Good job at description haha I enjoyed reading it and I liked the flare at the end. :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful imagery! I love poetry that is so hot it makes me feel oh so sexual. You did a wonderful job of penning that here. Well done!

[Saint No-One]

I enjoyed this immensely. Provocative and fun without being crass.

[Kristin Lee]

Extremely provocative and fun! I love the inuendos and puns. This is a saucy little piece that makes writing poetry sexy!

[Will]

Your word choice here is brilliant and mechanical, and you somehow avoid being verbose with your diction. Nice flow to it, and I really liked it. Great work, Sam

[B-poet]

Compelling diction can and will have anyone thirsty for more. An interesting metaphor you've created here. Nice write. :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Mmm...yes, the pure joy of being with a writer. I have often mused of living with a poet, as I think that hearing a man read poetry is probably the sexiest thing in the world. lol I like your fearless nature, my friend.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

it is indeed the sexiest thing ever to hear a man read his poetry to you thanks

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Someday for me, perhaps...

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Few Poet's can make words seem alive and filled with passion. You can. The description was direct and forward. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eddie Phillips]

Wow! LOL I enjoyed the adulation echoed in your words. You are supportive of creativity. I love the hint of passion you provide throughout this entire poem. It speaks of the intimacy two people can share. Awesome construction on this poem.

[Vannessa Monroe]

ooooo shivers* loved it loved it loved it!