Appeased

Appeased

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet



My brain a maze of oblivion

My skin is paper thin

I sulk

I grieve

But still no release

I'm tired of this heavy weight
weighing down on me

This anger
coated in sorrow
plagues me like a disease

It eats me alive
like Necrotizing Fasciitis

I want to crush you
in my hands like
the vile thing
that you are

I'm spinning
full of ideas
of all the ways
I could cut you

You gave my heart
the gift of destruction
and now I embrace
the dark's cold
in razor blade winds

Spilling and spewing
tears and blood
you severed
my heart
from my soul

Made me despise you

I can feel wraith growing
and over taking me

It has me
under its
complete
control

As I'm struggling
fighting to break through it's hold

This beast
is a beast on my back
it will be pleased
appeased

Once my being
is bound in poetry



By Samantha Pruitt

© 2014 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
You ate my heart I hope you choke on its broken heart rhythm

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I often talk of the chaos and web of connections in my own brain - this speaks to that very thing and makes me realize that most writers have a bit of a disturbed nature to them.

Not that it is a bad thing but rather one of the reasons we write in the first place.

Kudos and keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Are we ever really appeased, an intriguing piece that works well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"Made me despise you
I can feel wraith growing
and over taking me"
I like the complete. Honest and powerful anger. The above lines are amazing. When someone we despise come to our brain. Anger will grow. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! Really great imagery in this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I am sorry I really don't like or see the sense in dark poetry, but then I am a glass half full girl .. you don't need to send me read requests for works like this as I believe that negativity feeds at a very fast rate and I prefer to bathe in the sunlight ..

I appreciate we all view the world in our very own light ... so .. if it works for you ... awesome xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Samantha ~virginpoet

9 Years Ago

You will have to remove as a friend because I send out rr's to all my friends and I don't always wri.. read more
KWP

9 Years Ago

Ok cheers take care xx
Loved this dark & edgy write. Filled with razor-sharp imagery of a hurting heart wanting revenge on its inflictor. Great work, a gripping read. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the dark imagery- so symbolic :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is stellar! It is a fantastically well written and dark write! Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Great work! (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


This totally rocks. What a powerful piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The words spill in this poem like dark poisoned blood. I can almost smell the corpses and the death. Very dark ! well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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