Flowers

Our bodies intertwine
like a flowering fine.
Blooming with buds of love
and petals of lust.

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

Ive never studied any style I just write what consumes me. I would like to know what style if any that I write in I know I could learn it for myself but I like to do my own thing. Hope u get what I mean lol btw this gos for all my writing

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the lovely imagery created with such few words. Great work..xx

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words you create a amazing poem of desire and beauty. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Jibey]

The scent of a rose and the soft silky petals are always inspiring to me...as is the sight of two bodies embracing and excited by love's arousal... so beautiful when the limbs enfold each other and the buds expand in the heat... a fine flowering indeed... a dance of delight... Your words and the image are also inspiring...

[Science girl]

I enjoy your style very much. Why go out and figure out your "style" when writing what comes to your mind works perfectly. Very short and sweet poem. Great job!

Any style has it's beauty, try Haiku, 5 syllables, 7 and 5 again... I guess as Thomas recommend, it wouldn't be crazy for you :D well done in a few lines! liked it.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@ the in between Ive actually already did lol read Lips Lock To Stop Beats and I might have it in another poem cant remember lol

[the in between]

Sexual garden? Beautiful metaphor but can you expand it? Theres not really a mood to this, but the imagery is a lovely flower bed like of bodies I'm guessing.

[TJ]

I like your free form stuff. Dont be bound by these styles

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

For me I think that Haiku would be perfect for you, well done