Eminem

Eminem

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

Lyrical 

Grandmaster

poetic powerhouse


He spits
the most

detailed
poetically ill

perceived

concepts


Sweat profusely

runs down

his furrowed face
as his speech

increases

velocity
he

Opens
his
chest
on stage


and

Exposes ventricles
that flow with

descriptive words
thru pumping

rhythmical contractions
in purposefully

well articulated increments

his words igniting gorgeous hues
where blue green and red meet
a habit captive of unique words

and

Now

Hidden parts of him

are revealed

to be possessed

his flow comes endlessly
None stop no breathing


Cardiac arrest

D-A-A-A-M-N

This Rapper Poet's Blessed!

Hitting his

flow solo

He speaks

profound messages

that force open third eye

Daring them to see

The innermost workings

of his soul rhymes

This
he does

So
willingly

Because
he shines

As he
dominates

open mic

Spitting verses

intellectually integrated

on the tip of his

tongue


He

Commands Attention

Evokes fragments

of wisdom to come together

and

Thru

The mass

subjugation

of consciousness

He reaches out

to grab minds

Once closed

to the notion

That a

Rapper

Poet can

Miraculously elevate

the status of truth

To instant recognition

Just by his rendition

of

The Spoken Diction


By Samantha Campbell

© 2011 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
Just a dedication to one of my favorite artists

Forget his money
Forget his fame
you can even forget his hotness
I'm enamored with his mind and genius talent

Ive never been to a concert but given the chance Eminem's would definitely be my first

always editing and adding new lines to this

I dont like the ending that much

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I love Eminem, this was amazing. I loved the shape of the poem and everything about it. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well written. Long live Slim Shady!! lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Although I am not a fan myself lol This poem rocks! You got the flow as he would possibly say it also...cool work! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the shape of this poem. I admit I only skimmed it because I don't like Eminem, but it is shaped awesomeley.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful poem for a great artist. Eminem lived across the street from where I lived when I came out of the Army in 2000. I saw a man with children and he is willing to help his city. He is a good man. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it and he's a hotty for sure.. I could eat off those abs ;) lol..xx

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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