Take my Hand

Run away with me
let me caress your desire
with this e n d l e s s passion

Love is a constant tenant of my mind

My heartbeats monologue
your lips desire
beautiful sounds
escaping your mouth
every note wrote
with the stroke
of my tongue
my lips
crave
your lips
and never
the two
shall part

I'm in awe
of your style
Captivated
by your smile
Infatuated
with your lips
you got me inking
my private thoughts
onto uncensored pages
for all eyes to see
truth be told
you made my
defenses fold
poetically
speaking
you got me
m o a n i n g
your name

I know actions
speak louder than words
and these are only words
leaking from my pen
but I only write
what I feel
I'm just
keeping
it real

My feelings
are impossible
to conceal
I'm speaking
the truth baby
I'm incapable
of telling you lies

I hear the cries
coming from your heart
let me rescue you
take my hand
run away with me

A new love story
is ready to unfold
they say love is better
the second time around
and I'm ready for
the last
and final
round

I went down to the river
and let misery drown
as the melody of love
became a new sound

Take my hand
run away with me

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Harmony Lee]

How exhilarating this was for me to read aloud! The cadence and rhyming schemes, as expressed with such clever spacing between lines, flow in such a gently wonderful way. I am inclined to think the person on the receiving end of this poem could be very fortunate indeed, "poetically speaking". Thanks for sharing!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Another amazing write Samantha I was imagining every line which shows your true talent I would also like to thank you for your private message and I'm glad I could help I will be uploading a few pics today

anyway on with my review your writing never ceases to amaze me so passionate and expressive I am entombed by your writing and I never want to be set free

100/100

[Midday_Mystery]

Wow!! Great Write !

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is really good! i love it

[Frankie Nguyen]

I really liked this (: