Loss of Sensation

Loss of Sensation

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

Cant speak

Cant breath


Trying not to choke

on the passion
that's trying
to seep
inside
my throat


Holding me
in thrall


Enthused


Confused


My brain

blows a fuse

The flow seeps

through my veins
it highlights
my passions

and showcases my
darkest desires


Just the concept

of the flow
seduces my soul

Now come on Kisses


I know you

want my lips
and all that
my body contains


Placing gentle kisses

all over my flesh
enticing me
with your tongue

Your kiss is cosmic

every move is magic

No longer

an imagination
because Ive imagined
and what I thought
was real was simply
an illusion


I was delusional


My high starts to roll

with the stunts
pushing with
pinning moves

onto the taste buds

Take a bite

of my lips
give it a stroke
across the tongue
encapsulating
circling tracing patterns
and running trails
around my soul

Your kiss was all

I needed to be free

Fulfilling the hunger

that our bodies craved

Let my mouth

stay slick
as it glides

Wanting to swallow

not knowing
which way to go

So just let it

lay around pulsating

Splish

Splash

Y
our slippery
tongue

is so
fast

You got me drowning
in an orgasmic wave

Gently blowing

beautiful sensations
as you stroke my chest
with your fingertips

Softly ever so gentle

with your touch

As my insides erupt

like a Volcano
giving way
to hot lava

flowing
through
my body


Hypnotizing
with your moves

our bodies
will be locked
and bound

our hearts
are opening up

we're falling
into each other


I'm the Earth

your a Cataclysmic variable

A black hole


The cause of such
a tragic fate

the combustion
of these fiery rhymes


Spontaneous
Combustion

more volatile than any
volcanic eruption

dispersing magma
across your terrain
inferno
so rampant
it severs all sensation


By Samantha Campbell

© 2012 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
The line "Your kiss is cosmic every move is magic" is from Katy Perry's song ET it inspired this poem.

A Cataclysmic variable is A type of binary star system where from time to time one star gains some of the other star’s matter. As this happens a huge amount of light is given off.

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Well, you certainly built up a head of steam here... and the volcanic effect was defitnely like lava spilling down the mountain... :-)

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very, very good...loved the way this poem looked also.

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wow u have so much to say and what you say is brilliant well done :)

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I know the song of ET sung by Perry and I must say it was good choice for a line to add. Emotions and desire come alive in this piece. Brilliant write!

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The sheer vorocity of this piece lends emotion where there is none, fighting words that play roles within the mind, well done, good read.

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A amazing poem. Emotion, desire and passion is alive and well in this poem. I had to read a few times. A powerful ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

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beauty of a real poem dedicated lines...

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You are making love and lust eternal
yoursJVL

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this poem was hot!
well written!

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Ohh dear i nearly grew wings as i read on,i could fly with these words
oh yes lovely humans could do it and more..its like a strange and beautiful
feelings to comes..we change shapes and color and taste,the moods
of the mind goes up and high ,i know it will not stay long up there
for it takes a dive..but soon it will soar again..funny how the lips do taste
and the mind undulate..extreme joy ,then lessen a little only to start again
as i touch hands on skin like fly,and rominate all through your landscape
it looks everywhere here and there,never knows where to stop,only the mind
will tell..yes its magic ,human perfect how they start a thing that may never stop
only it has to before it explodes ,funny we have a limit or i swear i could cross continents
or even break out of gravity ,to fall into your space and you take me in embrace how i dive
to your depths..like some great enery is freed..i really coul;d not control..help me please
lovely write..

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