(Me)lodies

Come strum
my mental
sensuality
like the notes
on my Guitar

Testing 1st
my lips
auto-tuning
the rotation
and tempo
of my hips
with your
finger-tips
and lips

A(Major)
turn on
as my fingers
caress your staff
F (Flat) you ease me down
on my back
A (Sharp) breath
as your tongue ease
in between my lower lobes
to find my hidden flow

Finger-tips
strumming a melody
only you and I can hear
C (Flat) smooth
and E (Sharp) groove
our pitch in perfect tune
you create a flow
that is intricate-complexity
in my inner orifice
(the one down below)
with pearl waiting
at that inner door

Strumming
melodies
while flow
after flow
cascades
through
my body
til I can't
give you
no more

But your Down-stroke
has it's own Rhythmic values
Oh Wait
I feel more knocks
at my inner door
another strum
A (Sharp) tune you hit
 with pearl peaking from
her cherished shore

Acoustic Soul
sultry moods
gently strumming
got me swirling
got me humming
to your finger-tips
your soft lips
that tongue
that hits
that groove
again and again
I need to flow
find that beat

Your Down-stroke
has it's own
Rhythmic values
And your hips
hold the prize
that flows by way
of my inner thighs
It slips into
my warm
 abode and abide
In and Out of me
till you cum home
inside of me
outside of we

Strumming
my soul with
your Acoustic Soul
finger-tips
lips
tongue
and hips

Damn
 Now you wanna
throw a Drum-beat
in this smooth
complex inter-mix
creating
once again
that Tempo
and like a dope-fiend
I'm needing that Hit
that only you can fix
That Do, Ra, Me, Fa, So, La, Ti
reverse it
Ti, La, So, Fa, Me, Ra, Do

Acoustic finger-tips
scripts drips on lips
strumming (Me)lodies
creating sounds
on Double(D)'s
with your A (Sharp) licks
B (Flat) drips C (Me) melt

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

the pic is art by Mark Ryden Google him his an amazing artist

Wish I could have structured this poem into the shape of a Guitar

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Shaping it like a guitar would just be an accessory:) This was simply fantastic my friend...you have a unique point of view on your pieces- a factor that really enables me to enjoy your pieces all the more!

You gripped me with this:

"Finger-tips
strumming a melody
only you and I can hear
C (Flat) smooth
and E (Sharp) groove
our pitch in perfect tune
you create a flow
that is intricate-complexity
in my inner orifice
(the one down below)
with pearl waiting
at that inner door"

I found it quite sensually confusing...as you strung me between dimensions of music and sensuality:)

I love this piece...You are a master at what you do!!

so very creative, i really enjoyed this. The flow is amazing!

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Ohhh, what a wonderpiece of writing. It looks like you gave it an honest effort to shape it like a guitar

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the flow is fantastic on this, nice work!

[Letemdangle]

Very original and creative. A masterpiece!

[Fabric Pulse]

First off, your picture that you mention in author note is awesome! Great imagery feel for your words. Just what it needed for the correct spice extra. I love very much how in the title and poem that you put it like this, [Me]lodies. Creative! It says a lot about you, as always. =]

[Rossen]

Virgin poets dance around bound fires with hungry eyes for this man tied
to a post, the fire casts red and yellow hues upon skin and tongues
hanging low. Will he survive his own madding cries? He must play music and
be drunk on pounding rhythm and taste sweet melody before he wakes...

warn the kiddies please,

Rossen

[writing mojo]

This is so brilliant. It leaves me wordless and speechless at the same time, nothing but a sigh of relief that some could create such an incredible masterpiece with just fingers and ink in mind.... amazing stuff