Whalebone and Wire

My poetry
makes him
weak

Words
collapse
inside

Let me
be your
corset

Let my
words
squeeze
the air
from your
chest

Let my
thoughts
bind you
so tightly
you feel
like they're
cutting you
in two

Separating
your head
from your
desire

Setting your
c**k on fire

Feel the cut
of whalebone and wire
separating you from
these double D’s

I offer you

The sweet
flesh of me

Mark me
with your
teeth

Unlace
me

Let my
bruised skin
leap from
the pages
of my soul

Put me on

Pull me tight

See how
it feels

This mind bending
incomprehensible metaphor

~Spelled Backwards~

Deciphering the meaning
of this is absurd

esaelP ekaT
yM ytinigriV

Feel my embrace

So wonderfully tight

Can you imagine
the flow of my
climatic ink

Ill make you sigh
after my last line

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[~*Moody Thursday*~]

Your poetry stands out from everyone else's in this website. Out of my entire friends list, there is about 4 people who's poetry I truly love, and you're one of those people. Your imagination is infinite, and you have no restrictions or censors when it comes to manipulating words. Really, you're an amazing writer. Keep doing what you're doing.

[Her Guardian Angel]

Sexy, erotic, turn-on, exactly what i expect from you! I love it! keep em coming! (no pun intended)

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Sexy but good.

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo gave life to your words. I like the description leading the reader to a good vision. I like the complete poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Strong, desireable piece. Nicely done!~

[freelancejouster]

i like how thin this is. i like the power of the thinness. you've corsetted them in and i can feel their pressure. tantalizing.

[Jibey]

The short lines added to the tright grip of your words... wonderfully stimulating as they moved up and down like the tight vagina of a tight virgin

[Zoey Dead Girl]

Great job. Showed the desire and the burning sension within the words.

[AK]

Wow! That was amazing! The sheer desire and desperateness rings clearly in this wonderful poem. I loved it!

[johnnyqueer]

This is really good, I like the style of this.