Virgin Veils

Lately I've been dreaming in vague riddles 
of deep sleep scenes in broken segments
 
I Can't make heads or tails of this
 
Blurry vision
Subconscious schisms
 
Turn the pages
and step on in ...
 
Tender curves
naughty yearnings
of burning wanton flesh
deep inside my maiden depths

To myths and tales beyond the virgin veils

To the poetic Gods whispering verses
making words collide in the center of my soul
bursting and exploding outwardly infinitely
 
Inhuman things you hope aren't real
 
Obtuse lessons Shadow blessings
Seems like reality but I can't tell
If there's deeper meaning
or mental cleaning or even
prophecies within

Yet daily I ponder the elusive wonders
that ferment in my mind
when I'm out cold
 
Pulses racing The dark embracing
Flying high above worlds
 
But when the horizon breaks
and now I'm awake
How may I grasp
the oddities
my sleeping
mind creates

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Ziggy Matthews]

Great job with this piece as well. I would not have understood this piece as well a couple of months ago. Great job I cant wait to read more.

[Sethnicity]

Yum! hummm... I'd like to say it was a pretty poetic piece but I'd rather say Thanks for the coin operated Skull Grinding makes me want to trespass the tresses of your brains and clitoral cortex inside the grey matter space of your palace Curvasive! Now that's what I call Hand-Writing! I enjoyed taking this from the backside... to x-plane the poem really opens up when read from Tip to top! so hence...

"Yet daily I ponder the elusive wonders
that ferment in my mind
when I'm out cold

Obtuse lessons Shadow blessings
Seems like reality but I can't tell
If there's deeper meaning
or mental cleaning or even
prophecies within

Inhuman things you hope aren't real"

Such a Brilliant Feel Inside the Peaches peel! amazing what you can discover..
Underneath the covers.

EXCELLENT WRITE SAM!

F*****g Brilliant!

I can see you through CCD Flux...
(read it backwards)

[Jibey]

Words, words, words... always racing around and stirring our fantaises and desires... shadowy and teasing, never satisfied..

[Aristede Craig Jr]

oh my i love your tales your almost fairytale flow

[Kim Vaughn Sowards]

Great thoughts & feelings...

[Manda]

Strong imagery, passionate depth, and what an honest concept. You always deliver with such eloquence and beauty. Every word pours out a sensuality that is hard to convey otherwise. You , my friend, have a magical gift with adjectives and the ability to give the readers quite an image.

[johnnyqueer]

This is a most gorgeous write. I read it twice, I enjoyed it a lot! Great write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Dreams can twist us up and make us embrace us thing we need. The poem is amazing. You can always make me think with your strong thoughts and outstanding poetry..
Coyote

[joshua deathdealer]

This is powerful and it touches on a lot of different levels. I'm a big fan of your work and this one is one of your best. From the questions to the messages. Excellent work Samantha.