No. 623

No. 623

A Poem by Evangeline
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I miss you.

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If there's a Heaven,
It's on the moon.
If there's a Heaven,
I swear to God I'll meet you soon.
I'll go out with a bang, 
Just as you did.
But first I have to buy a shotgun. 


© 2016 Evangeline



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Whimsical and provocative. Like. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


If there's a Heaven its on your lips
If there's a Heaven between those hips
But since I cant reach Heaven at all
Ill be a devil and skip the crawl

Save the shotgun honey.

Very good. Loved it

Posted 9 Months Ago


Once again you have captured life as it is.
And life is not so hot.
Thank you
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 9 Months Ago


Love this, I agree with Jenna you brought a lot of emotions and things left unsaid in a beautifully short written poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I absolutely love this piece. You have somehow packed so much emotion and a beautifully sad story all in seven lines. Fantastic write!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on May 12, 2014
Last Updated on June 28, 2016
Tags: suicide attempt, loss, love, missing you, dream, astronauts, depression, moon, heaven, suicide

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Evangeline
Evangeline

Moved From San Francisco to the Middle of Freaking Nowhere, WY



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I'm taking all of the Aspynn stories and compiling them into a series of chapters. My account is becoming a little claustrophobic from his evil. In the meantime, any odd ideas that I have that don't.. more..

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