Beautiful Soul

Beautiful Soul

A Poem by Sage
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Everyone has that one person that they are sure is their soulmate, a person with whom they have some sort of connection. Sometimes those feelings can be put in words.

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Beautiful soul

You were standing there
With your lovely flowing hair
you seemed like a goddess, I swear
With you, I'd walk everywhere

You made my heart skip more than one beat
That, my lady is no ordinary feat
Your eyes, and your smile so sweet
And your heart, like a clean white sheet

I realised, in love I fell
Without you it wasn't hell, 
But you know Oh well,
Only on thoughts of you my heart would dwell

It did not matter if it was love or hate,
All I knew was that we were bound by fate
Seeing you, my heart rate elevates
Being with you was more than great!

In your heart, my love I had to chart
Then I decided and I dressed sharp,
I went ahead to steel my heart 
And steal your heart

Success! My boat finally reached your shore
You and I are now a complete whole
Together, we shall grow old
For you are my beautiful soul

© 2016 Sage


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A very sweet poem on a popular but meaningful theme. I particularly love the last two lines. Also your use of "steel" and "steal" in successive lines was a very good play on words. It does a good job of portraying someone who must brace oneself for the worst before they go in for love, which is something that I know I feel when I really like someone.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sage

8 Years Ago

Glad you can relate.



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I loved it!
One of my new favorites of yours!!
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful presentation. I have natural inclination toward this genre. Thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Fallen unto one... True love rules, and abides
The fact that you say it all and ryhme, in time, quite sublime. Il review your work anytime, Sir Sage

Posted 8 Years Ago


Deep emotional poem. The depths and conviction of your love for her are meaningful, pure , honest and limitless. 5th stanza last two lines,"I went ahead to steel my heart And steal your heart." steel...Mentally prepared, brace to steal her heart. Well expressed and written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


absolute Perfection. I enjoyed reading it. keep on Sage!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sage

8 Years Ago

Thank you Sarah! I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Sarah King

8 Years Ago

you're welcome. thank you for sharing your nice poem.
Beautiful words of love, from discovery to winning. All within a few short verses. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sage

8 Years Ago

Thank you! The best part is that it is a complete journey!
All I can say is that, this is still one of your beautiful poem-song! This time, I'm quite thrilled and happy for the happy ending. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


TheMalady

8 Years Ago

Yup! now that's an interesting twist. I would like to see how you accomplish it. :)
Sage

8 Years Ago

I guess I'll write a poem that has both of these elements. I just need a subject now.
TheMalady

8 Years Ago

Now that's creativity! I'll look forward to it! :)
What a darling love poem this is! Written intimately to a loved one, it reads well and is able to evoke a feeling of romance and happiness from the reader.

Thanks for sharing, will go through your other works,

Best,
M.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sage

8 Years Ago

Thanks Mallika! I did write this piece in happiness so I'm happy that it carried the same feeling I .. read more
Wow,,this is so beautiful and sweet...you really did portray real loce..it is not exagerated..just real....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sage

8 Years Ago

Thank you fellow poetess! :)
OMG! I love this so much...you have captured what falling in love is truly like...you are an amazing and creative poet...keep writing....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sage

8 Years Ago

Thank you Ellen! I'm happy you found it creative and good to read :)

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