The Hidden Goddess

The Hidden Goddess

A Poem by Sage
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The one. The one that makes you super happy and loves your company and make you love yourself. This is for her.

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The Hidden Goddess

You are sitting there
One hand on face, looking pretty
Your pretty lips and flattering hair
My heart calls out to you, 'Oh Sweetie!'

Did any guy test his luck?
I know they did, who would not!?
Your gentle grace hit me like a truck
That you fell for me in the end, I never thought

You're a goddess. Wait, more than that
Petty words cannot describe you 
You're more than art, a master craft
My love, like words for you just grew

You're amazing and witty
And you're funny and more than perfect
I'm crazy and gritty
With some humor in retrospect

When I see you, my heart thumps
Words flow like a cascading waterfall
My skull numbs, I go ba-dum
Cause you're fated to be mine after all

You're the Yin to my Yang
With you in tow, it is clear
We are one, we are a gang
For I have nothing to fear while you are here

© 2016 Sage



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Beautiful poem. Love this stanza. "You're a goddess. Wait, more than that
Petty words cannot describe you. You're more than art, a master craft."
Well expressed and written.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful. You seem to say that if she were not already real, you would create her just as she is now. True love and adoration is a rare find these days! I love the line 'words flow like a cascading waterfall'.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Well if you found your Yin - bravo! Hang on tight and cherish her forever - this was a very beautiful poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Just make this one as a song or did you already made it? I love the last stanza of your poem:

You're the Yin to my Yang
With you in tow, it is clear
We are one, we are a gang
For I have nothing to fear while you are here

This is my favorite. I don't have anything to critic here. As usual, your poems are really great. Just a way of expressing one's passion and emotions. Good job! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love the passion and the enthusiasm that is reflected in this work. Great!

Posted 1 Year Ago


what a stanza........ wonderful work.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


When I read this in my head it came out in a rather excited voice. Almost like a child jumping up and down from receiving an amazing present. That is how adorable this is. When you want to tell somebody how great they are but you just can't keep it all in, and yet cannot put in all in one sentence. Very nice :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Awesome first stanza!
Keep it up!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is such an adorable poem! I like that it's whimsical, but that adds a depth to it that being straight up romantic wouldn't have. Anyone who becomes a writer's muse would be flattered to receive such a well thought out, romantic piece! Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


this is a really cute and romantic poem. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on February 17, 2016
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