If at all

If only we were figures...
Accentuated in the night sky.
Starlit effigies bound by cosmic tethers...
Secrets of the universe many would attempt to pry.

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

The sort of thoughts to inspire space flight
As an engineer I may ask
"How do we get there"

[Lorry]

The title, as well as beginning with if, so small, but leads into infinite wonder of thing, if.
So few words, but perfectly placed. The words are still resonating as I reply.
Superb.

[Vivian Gospel]

I am kinda kicked about this lorry. Turned out to be a good attempt

[θεά]

This is a fascinating read Vivian. One that casts the mind in the apogee of wonderment and endless questions on the "what ifs?"

Truly, if we were celestial bodies of thr firmament, made of nothing but stardust but emanating light all the same, we'd be the subject of so much inquiry and spirit of discovery.

Well postulated.

Best,
M.

[Vivian Gospel]

So many endless questions, answers to which we will never know. Or will we? You tell me, Mallika. Will my questions ever be answered?

[θεά ]

I really wouldn't know, would I? Those are your questions, and if they bother you, best you seek professional help.

This is an online writing community. There is a life and world beyond this. Best, not to blur your lines. I anyway, have no time for cryptic messages or people seeking things one cannot give.

I don't sugarcoat my words. I don't lead people on. Less brutal that way.

Wish you the best, although I'd appreciate if you'd stop leaving messages on my profile.

Best,
M.

[Vivian Gospel]

I am truly sorry. I wont bother you.

[John the Baptist]

The thing I love most about epigrams is that they encapsulate profound knowledge briefly, so it can be readily remembered. This one is no exception. If only our cosmic roots were clearer to our senses, we would put seeking them above our worldly concerns. Well, rhymed, well done.

[Vivian Gospel]

I didnt intend to be philosophical but this came out that way. Funny how when we try to write something deep it doesnt come out the way...