Limerence

Now that I am here
Where am I?
Now that you are there
How are you?
I am away
So are you
Only difference being
My solitude haunts me
As does the thought
Of me having lost you.

Is this what they call limerence?

Author's Note

M.R. if you are reading this unblock me.

Reviews

[Louis McKraker]

Limerence, as I understand it, is when one is obsessed somehow with a limerent object--typically man/woman who doesn't feel the same about the one.
This is, as I understand it, what they call limerence.

It's great short-form poetry as well.

[Onlyme]

Interesting read. That can take you deeper into it. When you start to open up and let the words sink in.. MMM...

[SleeplessVolcano]

Always keen to discover a new word ~ limerence.
Personally, however, if I desire more contact from someone than what they are willing to give, I'd read between the lines and not expect more than what is reasonable. Easier said than done though ;)

Sometimes we consider someone a friend, though they only consider us an acquaintance.....when the relationship does not grow, or dies, it feels to us that we've lost a friend, though for them, it seems like "nothing". It's always sad when that happens, though in some way we brought it upon ourselves.

Great writing!

[Vivian Gospel]

Everyone says that. Logic agrees. Heart is a useless organ. Have any pot?

[SleeplessVolcano]

Naahhh....caffeine sufficiently addresses my mental health issues...;)

[Vivian Gospel]

Caffeine blows. It only kills my sleep and morning wood.

[¿]

Take care, Viv.........😧

[Vivian Gospel]

Hah! Are you mocking me Tahsin? I know you wouldn't.

[¿]

You think so? :(
It's just that once a person blocks you can't see your writing....
Now I can only wish you to take care...this matter is a complicated-solved.

[Vivian Gospel]

I didn't get the last line of your comment. I assume english isn't your native tongue?

[¿]

Yess...non English speaker and English is third language..."complicated-solved"....I made up this word as per your situation... For M.R the "Vivian"matter is closed and for you "M.R" is a feeling yet.
Hope you understand...

[¿]

third language for me*

[Vivian Gospel]

Gotcha. I didnt intend to offend you

[¿]

Ah, it's ok!...now, do take care :) I won't tell you to smile cause that would be you being hard on you...so just take care..

[Vivian Gospel]

Nah smiling is easy. Hence i do it sparingly. ;)

Did you talk to her as i asked you before?

[¿]

Is it? Smile Viv.....wider😊

[Vivian Gospel]

What's in it for you?