Scared

A noise stirs the motion.
The needed winds are a scare.
The shattered bulb;
a light lost in the dust.
I look to myself,
prove my way to the exit.
Furnitures hit, then
dreams collide.
The door is nowhere near.

Reviews

[Andrea]

I love your descriptions,

Do you paint???

I hope you do?

I can't imagine 'dreams collide'

I see you seek that the the 'door' but it's far.
I t is so sad to see such young talent so fed up!

[nono]

Everyone feels like this sooner or latter. The scares of something can really hurt a person. And the expressions in this is beautiful nicely said!

[Vivek Koshy]

nightmare.

[DamienHino]

you move in discomfort, furious winds, lights break. you question yourself as to what to do. sounds like a tornado hit...or possibly a nightmare...hmm i'm curious