Friendly Fire

Disastrous.

A peep for the culprit,
still a lot to hide.
Search, forced to.
The yard is empty,
the liar clever.
Footsteps of the captain;
find him!
The duty of command,
propels.
He is never found;
he could never be.

He lives in me.

Reviews

[nono]

Hey it happens! It's not uncommon a life is like a fire, so you must be careful to not disturb it otherwise the fire grows only to destroy. It's hard for fire to do something good it's rare, but it happens! Nicely done!

brilliant ending. it was unexpected.

[DamienHino]

WOW! I was wondering what he did but then I looked at the title...intense.