My Secret Obsession

My Secret Obsession

A Poem by Vivica Heart
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This one I wrote back in October of '07, I believe. I love it, not because it's a wonderful poem but because it still expresses how I feel. And after all, isn't that the point of petry? To express emotions? Anywho... Go on and read it now.

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I fell in love with a guy that I've never met.
It's been months, but I haven't talked to him yet.
I think it's my fears that keep me away.
They keep me from saying what I really want to say.
They keep me from telling him the truth,
From just walking up and saying those three words,
"I like you."
But as I said, my fears keep me from it,
And as my emotions reach their summit,
I wonder if he even knows that I exist.
If he does, it's only as 'the girl with a heart drawn on her wrist.'

 

© SRM '07

© 2008 Vivica Heart


Author's Note

Vivica Heart
So what do you think?
Love it?
Hate it?
'Snothing special?
I want to know what you think of it.
Even if you think it's a piece of crap...

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very sweet
i love how you express your emotions in your writing of how you don't espress your emotions in your life
brilliant
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

Posted 16 Years Ago


I would've thought, "girl with heart on her sleeve"...good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like this because I have felt like this so many times. I probably even have a similar poem around somewhere. The last few lines are my favorite.

Great job! =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I enjoyed it very much and it showed a lot of emotion that many people relate to. Have you talked to him yet?
Thanks for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


love it i feel liike this sometimes especially bout this guy that i know now but i dont really know him n dat sux

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2008

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