Beautiful Sight

Just a poem about a girl I love. Or at least am very close to love with. I dunno if she loves me back or not yet.

Day by day,

Night by night,

All I can think of,

Is the beautiful sight,

Of you.

I don't exaggerate when I say,

That you're the one I want to see most of my day everyday,

And whether I was able to see you or not that day,

Whenever I close my eyes and stop trying to think,

I get to see the beautiful sight,

The beautiful sight of you.

Author's Note

Um, just tell me what you think in the comments.

Reviews

[Amy R]

Aww, what a lovely little poem,
"All I can think of,
Is the beautiful sight,
Of you."
You expressed it so well here.
Glad to see you find happiness in her.

[Playing with Demons]

This was freaking cute
And that girl is a lucky ducky
Damn, this was very nicely written and adorable
It made my day!

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah I wrote it when I was 11 but even now nearly 16 it can still be used :D

[Playing with Demons]

Awe when you were eleven!!!!! Eek
That's so cute I'm gonna explode

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, yeah, it wasn't written for the person it can still be used for today... like, it was written for one person, and nowadays, there is another person, but it can still be used. :P

[Playing with Demons]

Yay adorable!!!!!!!

[The StoryTeller]

........... lol

[Playing with Demons]

Haha sorry.
But that's proof I'm a girl

[The StoryTeller]

Yea, that is pretty good proof, and no need to apologize. :P

[Playing with Demons]

Sorry I felt like I may have upset you
Yeah but I'm also good at kicking a*s so don't let my girly side fool you :P
Are you a walking dead fan?

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, you didn't upset me, why would you think that? And okay, I believe you. And yes, I am. :D

[Playing with Demons]

Omg DID YOU SEE THE NEW EPISODE I CRIED AND IT WAS SO SAD
sorry I just thought I did :/

[The StoryTeller]

No, I didn't... can't get it on cable, no AMC XD

[Playing with Demons]

NOOOOO
omg it was f*****g sad as all hell

[The StoryTeller]

I'll tell you when I see it... although I'll probably have to wait till Netflix has it.

[Playing with Demons]

Netflix is such a beautiful thing
That and tumble have consumed my life good lord
But anyways yeah I need emotional support :P

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, the only problem is that Netflix takes forever to get the newest episodes. And well, I'm here for you.

[Playing with Demons]

It really does
I can't wait for them to get the new parks and rec season
Haha why thank you

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, and yeah, no problem.

[Playing with Demons]

So yeah um I have an English essay and geometry homework so I'm gonna do that
I had fun talking to you
Night night

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, I'm actually working on homework as I do this, and lol, good night to you too.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

nice poem nicely written...
:)

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you Salman. :)

[iNSOMniAC]

Awww! This was so adorable!!

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you. :)) It was written about someone when I was younger, but can fit someone now. :D

[The StoryTeller]

I mean that's when I wrote it, when I was younger.... you probably understood that. XD

[iNSOMniAC]

Yeah, I did. xD

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, don't laugh at me XD

[iNSOMniAC]

HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE~

[The StoryTeller]

lolololololol :p

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. The positive vision and thoughts of someone described with care and concern.
"Whenever I close my eyes and stop trying to think,
I get to see the beautiful sight,
The beautiful sight of you."
Some people can steal our heart. These are the best days of a life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, they definitely can capture your heart and steal it from you. And the thing is, you want to let them keep it, you don't even care. I'd rather someone capture my heart and spend one moment in love than always have my heart to myself and go my entire life without love.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Better to have love and lost. Than never to loved at all. A very old quote.

[The StoryTeller]

Yes, one of my favorite quotes. "I'd rather/spend one second with love in my life/than go a million years/without knowing what it's like." -NF (Christian Rapper) Anyways, thanks. :)

[Tina Kline]

A very tender and romantic love poem.
You did a wonderful job on capturing how it can be.

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you, I tried. This is just my feelings, I'm not sure if it's love, but if it is, it's awesome. :)

[Tina Kline]

You are welcome.

[The StoryTeller]

:) I would check out your stuff to but I can't so... but if I could I would.

[Tina Kline]

That's okay.

[The StoryTeller]

......... ;)

[The StoryTeller]

I'll check it out now.

[DoormanDan]

This is a sweet little poem. The way you repeated the word "day"all throughout the poem, I think, really adds a nice feel to the already pleasant atmosphere of this piece. You've done an awesome job here! :)

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you. It's the atmosphere I was trying to create. :D