Fight One More Night (Rap)

Just a rap about some things I feel. This song was inspired by some songs I was listening to by NF, Eminem, and Macs. It also is a call to me and inspired by what I feel God is calling me to do.

Verse 1- As I sit here and write this verse/I wonder what's worse/living another day or taking a ride in a hearse/I wish my life was great/like it was a play/like it was rehearsed/maybe even reimbursed/but first/we'd have to start with a clean slate/set up a date/with a time machine/but wait/do I know everything I would change?/ok/now hurry/let's get there/can't be late/

            But that's the thing/if I erased it all I wouldn't be me/I wouldn't be what I be/I wouldn't see things the way I see/yeah/maybe I wouldn't be in pain/but how much is the cost/how much am I willing to give up to be free/how much has to change/not just in me but we/cause I gotta make my Christ Christ beats/even if it means I have to bleed/and it's not because I feel I have to do some good deed/nor drown myself in spiritual mead/it's just God's had me have such pain so I can help those in need/and so I can plant God's seed/faith and grace help me/because if to do so I have to live this life of pain/then so it will be...

(x4)Chorus- I'll deal with this pain for others gains/stand in this rain for others/so they can control their mains/do anything for the world's dames/I'll continue in the meantime to control, fight, or kill my demon/to him tame...

Verse 2- Ill-est s**t I ever wrote?/realist s**t I ever spoke?/I dunno/I dunno if it's dope/but maybe my words have power/as much as the pope/but I know I can't sit around no more/can't mope/gotta forgive/can't self hate/nope/'cuz then I can't help others/I'm to focused on me/while simultaneously trying to cut my own throat/while at the same time trying not to drown/trying to stay afloat/try to cross my heart's moat/have to take back my kingdom/sit on my heart's secondary throne/God on the first/

            Swim to it if I ain't got no boat/oh/I say/whoa/bombs bursting all around/but I ain't got no time to throw myself to the ground/time is short/it's do or die/I ain't got no time to worry about my own safety/forget being safe and sound/I trip/stumble/run/catch myself/gotta keep moving/no can't fall down/gotta end this once and for all/yea/nearly there now/oh/wow/it's like bam kabloom pow/comic book like/this war is so crazy/bullets flying/whizzing/I'm hit/whatever/keep going/no time to say ow...

(x4)Chorus- I'll deal with this pain for others gains/stand in this rain for others/so they can control their mains/do anything for the world's dames/I'll continue in the meantime to control, fight, or kill my demon/to him tame...

Verse 3- Yea/maybe I'm lame/but I ain't no dame/nor am I still a monster/I'm not the same/but the monster inside him I got to tame/forget about this rap game/I got to fight/can't let this burning shame/burn me down/I'm a walking torch/I was gone and now I've come/back/'cuz I gotta stop ths crap/it ain't just about doing good/not just easy as all that/it's like trying to stop eating when you're hungry only much harder/fighting back/against yourself and your words/like how you say you're fat/or a snitch/or a rat/you're sneaky/like a cat/tripping around people's hearts/changing them/inner demon you/yea/he laugh/

             but you know now he's daft/you're almost done/nearly there/nearly won/used your imagination/you'll get there no matter how/even if you have to sail in on a whale/a crazy craft/or just take a raft/or take a plane and crash your aircraft/down into the castle/exit through the shaft/do some matrix s**t/yea/not bad/you're no longer gonna be stepped on like a mat/you've broken out of the universe's top security prison/the security was max/rain/oh the acid rain pours in waves off of the brim of your cowboy hat/but never again/never will you sit/as you sat/you've decided you'll always stand/continue to fight back/because a voice in you screams in defiance against the world I'm not done yet/it's you against billions/on your shoulder you got a tat/RESILIENT_FORVER/Firefly on your shoulder/that light/you got dat/fighting the endless darkness/it's your turn/you're up at bat/hitting each ball with a resounding crack/firing into the crowd of dark with a gat/you're your our my their his her/all those who we I me you were/when we felt that pain/their last hope/you're zat...

(x4)Chorus- I'll deal with this pain for others gains/stand in this rain for others/so they can control their mains/do anything for the world's dames/I'll continue in the meantime to control, fight, or kill my demon/to him tame...

Author's Note

This song is to "Master of Tides" by Lindsey Stirling. The link is here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0mViDcz4RNM
The song starts around 6 seconds (with the rap) and finishes around 4 minutes. Between 3:49 and 3:59 I let the beat finish off the song.
Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[iNSOMniAC]

LINDSEY STIRLING INSPIRATION. WHEEEEEW~! xD
Anyway, I normally don't listen to rap, but I can't help but want to hear this in a song...

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, and I guess maybe one day you will.... I don't think it's that good though, that you would suddenly listen to rap for it. XD

[Andrew Dane Parker]

Really, really, good. And yes, I can tell its Eminem inspired, was thinking he should rap it the whole time. Maybe you should send it to him. Lol. Anyway, amazing work!

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you, that's also what people tell me when they hear me rap, saying I sound like him. I don't see the resemblance but eh. Check out some of my other stuff. Don't worry, I'll check out yours too.