Judgement Skit (Rap) (Skit)

Nothing to say here. :p

It's judgement day our fire drill/hell is on it's way/it's fire is on wheels/maybe it will/be an easy death/painless/but I bet that won't be how it feels/and it don't burn to burn/it burns to kill/my fire burns me/I just wanna heal/but no/here today everything goes/everything dies/I'ma lose my flow/I already know/what's gonna go/

Down/wow/I feel so crazed/I know it/I just don't know-how/I warranted a death like this/I thought I deserved eternal bliss/but life's a b***h/I probably too many times said f**k this s**t/too many times wanted to hit/there/it's burning my hip/my legs/my arms/I try to sit/but I fall/

Hit the wall/crawl/try to get away/my pitiful cries sound like squalls/the fire almost seems to angry/like it's thinking the gall/of this guy/I'm asking please tell me why/why I gotta die/I cry/whine/I say yea I know I lied/but my mouth is gagged by fire/my hands tied/

I scream/I can't believe/that this is happening to me/or we/'cuz you see/we're all bad/don't get mad/it's fact/if I only had/one more life to go back/and do it again/I wouldn't sin/I'd have been/at church/at life group/man/I would've ran/that extra mile/all the while/

Not trying to lie/I'd give up my ego/my style/I'd pile/my thoughts/feelings/everything on your altar/I'd never falter/or doubt in my faith/I'd stay on the right path, pointed away from Hell/pointed straight/I'd stop trying to find my mate/I'd stop always berating/

Myself for what I've done and what I'm gonna do, I'd stop acting the damn fool/stop trying to be cool/if I could go back/I'd just be your tool/but I can't go back/and the threat of the fire's coming so near/so from here/on out/I'll lie near to you/I'll be dear/from on out here/yeah...

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Acerbus]

As someone who writes rap lyrics as well I can appreciate this, good work!

[iNSOMniAC]

Daaang. You should record yourself rapping this!

(I didn't see anything that needed recommendations, and if there are any mistakes, I didn't see them.)

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, I would, people tell me I should or should make a Youtube account. I can't right now (for reasons I'm reluctant, not altogether not going to, just reluctant to share) but I should be able to in June.... I'm thinking if I make one, I might as well continue with my name: RESILIENT_FORVER. It's my TeenInk name, my Playstation Network Name, my Writers Cafe name, and so many more. XD People will see my name on different things and wonder if I'm the same guy. XD

[iNSOMniAC]

That would be so awesome! I'd subscribe to you and support you on my channel. Lawl, 46 subs... what a charm.

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, okay. :p

[Cool Girl]

It's amazing!!!! Do you like to rap?

[The StoryTeller]

Yea, I have an entire folder of raps (only a few are skits) that is quite thick. I'd post them but I'm trying to type up the first chapter of my book (I'm on like 6 and they're long chapters) while dealing with Honors English 2 (that's worth an entire schoolday xD) and all other school stuff and reviewing, but I plan to post more. Lol, i'm rambling, sry, yea I like to raop. :)

[Cool Girl]

xD you must be very smart, like me!! xD
I can't wrap, my voice is too high. It sounds weird when I try xD
I'm good at singing though!! My best friend loves to rap:)

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, yea, I can barely sing. Some people tell me i'm amazing, some people tell me I'm horrible, but most tell me I'm about a 5 outta 10.

[Cool Girl]

xD People say I'm an 8 out of 10 at least

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, that's good! A lot better than me :p

[Deeksha Jain]

http://deekshastories.blogspot.in/

[The StoryTeller]

..? Again, is this something you want me to review? This: http://deekshastories.blogspot.in/

[Cool Girl]

Idk. I didn't post it... XD

[The StoryTeller]

lol, yea, I wasn't thinking you did. XD well, i'll leave it up to see if they want me to do something with it. Perhaps they'll tell me. If not, whatever. Like I said on my other article, it's not harming anyone. And even if it's spam, it's not everywhere.