You may....

I wrote this to someone I care about once... I hope they will always remember it.

You may not think about me as much as I think about you.

You may not like me like I like you.

You may not want to be with me.

But I'm here for you.

Whenever, however, why ever, I am.

You deserve the world.

I will do my best to minimize your pain.

Smile Often.

Nos moritur te salutamus.

We who are about to die salute you.

Author's Note

As you may have noticed, this has a deeper meaning, but I doubt you'll know what it is. Anyways, just tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Aaron Jinks]

This is really sweet. We'd go to far lengths for someone that really means something to us. Writing has always been a cool, unique way for one to share how they feel about something/someone, and you've done an excellent job doing that. Great job. :)

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you! And I totally agree with that. :) I mean after all, so many people did it. Lord Byron, Shakespeare, Herman Melville, etc, etc. I'm glad you liked it.

[Tania]

Very nice !!! Awesome poetry

[The StoryTeller]

Glad you liked it! I wrote this for someone.

[Tania]

Lucky person. Once again beautifully written..
Have a good day :)
-Beyourself

[The StoryTeller]

Lol thank you. :) I will.

[jonah]

hmmmm the last two lines got me perplexed. well the first lines talk about faithfulness, the strong willingness to be there for someone we care about, at least that's what I get. these 2 lines in the end...well i'm guessing you're trying to bring up the idea that to be faithful means to sacrifice even our lives. but I'm not quite sure..you have to explain me this hahaha. anyway, good job!

[The StoryTeller]

Yes, that was part of the point... plus it's a personal thing between me and the person... the first line is Latin, and the second line is the English version. It kind of means even for sacrifice between us, it means a lot of respect, and it kind of means no matter what. It's hard to explain, that's kind of the best I can... Anyways, glad you liked it. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot said in the short poem. Short statements with great meaning. I like how you capture a time and understood. There was no returning back to it. I liked how you ended the poem. Left me with questions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The StoryTeller]

I'm really glad you liked it and that you liked how I wrote it... :) I wrote it for someone so... yeah.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well. I hope they liked it.

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, they did.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

wow, i am speechless after reading this poem what a nice piece of work..... :)

[The StoryTeller]

I'm glad you liked it Salman :)

[Ishita Dixit]

My poem,about a boy,was based on the same lines. I believe that those who are meant to stay in your life will stay. And the ones who did not value you don't deserve the good that you are.
Anyway, amazing writing this is Blade! :-)

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you Ishita. :) That meant a lot to me. That I mean, that you would say I'm good. I'm starting to try and listen. I'm glad you liked the write. :) I wonder, since you're in college, if your teachers would read my work and if they would like it too.... College writing professors reviewing though.... mmmm I dunno about that, I might be terrified lol. XD

[Ishita Dixit]

Lol!
No one in my college knows that i write. Except for my roomie.
So... but you guys like my work. So i've got that going for me!
P.S. STOP DOUBTING YOUR TALENT BLADE!
YOU. ARE. AMAZING.

[The StoryTeller]

Well, I think that you are an amazing writer and that maybe you should share that and lol, okay, I'm going to STOP DOUBTING MYSELF :p

[Ishita Dixit]

Good!
And I will share my writings. But later.

[The StoryTeller]

How much later? I can't stop doubting myself and believe "I. AM. AMAZING." until you do that, a request for a request. :p

[Ishita Dixit]

Lol. Ok. Once my professors get free from all the exam hustle, I will show her my work and yours too. :))

[The StoryTeller]

Nononononononononnonononononono!!!! Just your work plz... I think she would scoff at mine...

[Ishita Dixit]

Oh Blade! :')
Ok. As you say.
Although i am sure she would like it.

[The StoryTeller]

I guess if you really want to show it to her you can and tell me about it afterwards... I just... I'm scared to let an actual professor (let alone college one) read my work... but you can if you want.

[Ishita Dixit]

I can and I will!

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, okay... I hope she doesn't think I'm horrible... look at me, throwing a pity party for myself, drowning in my depression right now, being like well I hope etc etc etc... yet as of right now I don't really care... bleh

[Cool Girl]

Every time I see your profile picture, I either smile or laugh. I just can't help it! That face just...😂😋
Okay, moving on from that.. THIS IS SO FREAKIN ADORABLE!!!!!! Sorry, Im literally still hyper from 3 pieces of cookie cake and two pouches of Kool Aid that I had yesterday xD
I'm pretty sure it didn't work out between you two based on the description, but nice job!!

[The StoryTeller]

Well, she was more in her head and wouldn't let anyone in, so this was my backing off thing. But later she started to come around, but then she got a boyfriend. Then she thought I was flirting with her sister and was jealous (with a boyfriend) and it's a really long story, but now she says even though she likes me she "loves" her boyfriend, and she gives her sister and I her blessing. Anyways, you probably don't care. And lol, hyper C.G..... Oh, and why? Why do you either smile or laugh? That face just what? XD

[Cool Girl]

Wow, that sounds complicated.. No, I do care! I like listening to your stories:)
Idk why I either smile or laugh.. It's just really funny xD

[The StoryTeller]

Lol it is really complicated and lol, ok I guess I'll take that as a compliment about my stories, and why is it so funny????? XD

[Cool Girl]

I have no idea why it's funny! It just is xD you're such a selfie taker.. LOLZ

[The StoryTeller]

Lol that's so... I don't know. XD How is that funny? And it's not like I'm a selfie taker I just took a bunch within 5 min so there would be pictures on here. XD

[Cool Girl]

Lol okay sure..you only took a couple XD
I already told you, i don't know why it's funny! It just is.. Haha

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, you're so weird.

[Cool Girl]

And so are you.. xD

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, not as much as you though. "Crazy people don't know they're crazy, and that's what makes them crazy. I however, know I am crazy, and therefore, I am not crazy. Isn't that crazy?" -Jack Sparrow :p

[Cool Girl]

Yes indeed, but I am weird and I know I am weird so therefor I am not weird at all!

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, but this is all a figment of your imagination making you BOTH crazy AND weird. :P

[Cool Girl]

Ugh.... xD

[The StoryTeller]

See, you are realizing how all of this is fake... fak... fa.... f.... .....

[Cool Girl]

Lol...........

[The StoryTeller]

Lol....Lo.....L..... .......

[Cool Girl]

You keep doing that with your words xD
Ha.... H.... ........

[The StoryTeller]

No, you did it wrong, it's ha ha... ha h.... ha .... ha..... h...... .....

[Cool Girl]

Oh :P
Lolol

[The StoryTeller]

Oh :p Lolol... Oh :p Lolo.... Oh :p Lol.... Oh :p Lo.... Oh :p L... Oh :p... Oh :...... Oh ........ Oh....... O....... .......

[Cool Girl]

You're such a dork xD

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, sure, says the girl that listens to some song about a cat. XD

[Cool Girl]

Hey! That was not my fault, my cousin turned it on xD

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, sure, tell it to the jury.

[Cool Girl]

Who said I'm going to court? xD

[The StoryTeller]

Writers café XD

[Cool Girl]

Traitors xD

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, whatever. I'm not one. :p

[Cool Girl]

LoL bye...

[The StoryTeller]

XD Adios :p

[Lizardo]

"If you ever need a friend, there's a sit along side me" Roads untravalled, Linkin park
Maybe it didn't work out with a girl or something, but we're just asking to be friends.
Another great poem Blade, you have a lot of talend my friend

[The StoryTeller]

Agreed. And thank you Lizardo. :)