Puddles of Pain

Always here, every day

Never fear, you won't pay

I wait, hesitate

Fill with anger oh and hate

Drippin' flippin'

Crawlin' fallin'

Into this deep of wretchedness

Meticulous harness of anguish

Get crazy and tears of pain and blood

Get crazy and tears of pain in mud

Jumpin' over these puddles of pain

Fallen into these puddles of pain

Reappear, reappear, get it well,

 

 

 

The more I realise, it's hopeless, hopeless

This is what they want

Fill with anger oh and pain

Spillin' over into these dratted

Dratted puddles of pain

Into this steep of wretchedness

Meticulous harness of anguish

Get crazy and tears of pain and blood

Get crazy and tears of pain in mud

Jumpin' over these puddles of pain

Fallen into these puddles of pain

And I think that I can show you

I shall emerge completely free

From the puddles of pain so

Get crazy and anticipate my reign

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This was a fun one with a lot of bite. Kind of like Barqs rootbeer. I loved the repetive nature of the poem how is goes into a full circle and just flows very well. My favorite line in this piece was definitely "Fill with anger oh and hate" I'm not quite sure why but it put a smile on my face. This was great. I love the puddles too. I can see the puddles filling with the dark crimson color of pain. This was a great piece and just so much fun. Great Job!