I Wish

I wish 

I could write

In such a way that leaves the audience

Angry that my piece had an ending

Every word

Every sentence

Would paint a picture in their minds

As if they were there in my little world

Every heart throbbing emotion

Would tear through the reader

Making them tear with sadness

Or cry out in joy of my character

I wish

I could speak

The same way I wish I could write

In the essence of power and fluency 

Every word

Every sentence

Flows without the slightest hesitation

And with meaning behind every syllable

Every person turning their heads

So their ears can listen to my words

Written or spoken, I wish I had both

So my words can never be misused

Reviews

[Frontier]

Would paint a vivid picture in their minds
As if they were there in my written world

Here I would take out the vivid, or even put "Paint their minds vivid" just because I think the reader already knows you want to do that, as a writer. Also, written world, written it seems is not necessary.

I love the first stanza.

[audrie]

This is awesome - It is a contradiction of what you wrote - I like the idea of wanting to ccaptue the audience because I really think that that is the point of sharing work. . . can"t wait to read more - thanks for the good read

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is filled with a longing to find that voice within your soul...
It's there, I promise... all you have to do is listen...

Well expressed, Ian!~xoxo~:)

[Ian Faraway]

I cant hear it. It's a whisper in the wind I can't seem to catch.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Clean out your ears, maybe? lol ;)