...DiStOrTeD ViSiOn....

...DiStOrTeD ViSiOn....

A Poem by Jason

There’s a story unheard

A story of wonder

Witches tap inside & unlock the spell that they blunder

But never in society is this to be accepted

Heads are deceased the second it’s mentioned

Nobody seems to be innocent

But can still buy their love

Scrubbing their hands, but can’t remove the blood

So the hands embrace the forehead

And the forehead hangs in shame

Innocent lives shall now take the blame

And then it begins…

The self-indulgement

Depressed little eyes will dig an early coffin

And for all these leaders

There are a million to follow

Who live through another day alone in the swallow

Hollow hearts become noting but a metaphor

For everything in life we have been forced to settle for

Where the picture is painted

And young lives are tainted

And in search for the truth to this day

But still waiting

Hold on my god, I feel my calling

Blessed the skies, bleeding and falling

Freedom in grass, brutally killing

Indulging solid water, in a distorted vision

© 2009 Jason


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I like this piece. I am going to take a stab at what I think it means I read it twice. lol Yes I am not very smart so here goes. Please correct me if I am wrong. I am trying to get better about really absorbing what I read. This piece reminds me of apocalyptic times. Where when the chaos starts to happen before the world ends. How we will stay to see things as ok over time and will distort our vision for the truth. Of course isn't that always the cycle of things now. We accept things and turn a blind eye to injustice because it is easier than to fight something we don't know how to fight. This was my take on it anyway.
Hope I didn't mess it up too badly. :-) It is a brilliant piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I find this fascinating but am a bit lost as to what it is actually about ~ Faith in a society that seems to be losing it ? better not blame those witches, they may put a spell on you :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the rhythm you use. Did you think of the title first and write the poem around it, or write the poem and then find the title? I almost get the sense that you thought of the title first, but I couldn't explain why I feel this. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


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ICE
This piece has an amazing flow. Its ....I can't even find the words... I think that you wrote about how we as a society turn our backs to things that we should be looking at...maybe even trying to stop the flow of how things are right now. There is a huge meaning here....and its very true. Thank you for sharing this.

~ICE

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this piece. I am going to take a stab at what I think it means I read it twice. lol Yes I am not very smart so here goes. Please correct me if I am wrong. I am trying to get better about really absorbing what I read. This piece reminds me of apocalyptic times. Where when the chaos starts to happen before the world ends. How we will stay to see things as ok over time and will distort our vision for the truth. Of course isn't that always the cycle of things now. We accept things and turn a blind eye to injustice because it is easier than to fight something we don't know how to fight. This was my take on it anyway.
Hope I didn't mess it up too badly. :-) It is a brilliant piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very nice rhymes and a good flow!
great written, good job.

Akina :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good flow! I found it easy to follow an it told a story without really telling the specifics! I love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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