For God's Sake

For God's Sake

A Poem by Jason
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Time may change us...and may make us move forward in life... but time should not dictate your opinion of another.

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Gather round'' Gather round' amiss this tiny little town

Full of land, full of life, full of drama, full of cows

And then there's people, Oh yes I remember, I can slowly remember now

I used to be part of them, used to be a part of that crowd

But not now, can't tell ya how, or when it was I fell down

And was forgotten in that town, as a voice without a sound

But it happened long ago, and took form while I lived at a distance

A victim of circumstance? Or just a glitch in time's persistent existence?

Good riddance, good rubbish, all is hidden, for old lover's

I've hindered, You've hovered, Now you say I have a decision to uncover

In front of me there's a bottle and a baby And I'm reaching for the wrong one to save me

It's quite shady, but quite frankly I couldn't care less if you hate me

Correct me if I'm crazy But if blood is like gravy; thick and amazing

Then how do you call yourself family when you're nowhere to be found lately

I find it simply amazing that when the tough gets going So many get going away

Unwilling to bend and so afraid they might break...For god's sake,

Is it too much to ask for you to share a few laughs?

With a loyal sense of air within grasp That doesn't choke the life out of your past?

If this poses a question in your mind, then maybe it pertains to you

But don't judge a man's integrity before you gather the truth

Before you gather around and gossip over my every mistake

Take a deep breath and a long look in a mirror for god's sake

© 2009 Jason


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Amen, Amen, Amen....oh have I been at the point of feelings as this, asking the questions that are asked in your "pointing the finger in the right direction" write!

The do gooders, the holier than thous, the condemnators aka the exterminators, the "I never did anything like that" persons who just love to judge others but fail to see the plank in their own eye!

You tell it like it is and that is just the way it should be told!

Wonderful insight Cuz!....keep shouting it! Do you think if they look in the mirror they shall not be able to see themselves for all the smoke they have created?

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I been called "The Changemaker" by friends and family.. This piece resonnated with me on so many levels. You wrote this with such a fine ear and eye and delivered to us a most wonderful piece.
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I find it simply amazing that when the tough gets going So many get going away
Unwilling to bend and so afraid they might break...For god's sake,

The nail in the coffin !!
I thank you for this eye-opening write,
Lynne

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In front of me there's a bottle and a baby And I'm reaching for the wrong one to save me
It's quite shady, but quite frankly I couldn't care less if you hate me
Correct me if I'm crazy But if blood is like gravy; thick and amazing
Then how do you call yourself family when you're nowhere to be found lately
I find it simply amazing that when the tough gets going So many get going away
Unwilling to bend and so afraid they might break...For god's sake,

So very Awesome here!
I love this, I agree with Sheila...AMEN!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In front of me there's a bottle and a baby And I'm reaching for the wrong one to save me
It's quite shady, but quite frankly I couldn't care less if you hate me
Correct me if I'm crazy But if blood is like gravy; thick and amazing
Then how do you call yourself family when you're nowhere to be found lately
I find it simply amazing that when the tough gets going So many get going away
Unwilling to bend and so afraid they might break...For god's sake,

So very Awesome here!
I love this, I agree with Sheila...AMEN!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In front of me there's a bottle and a baby And I'm reaching for the wrong one to save me
It's quite shady, but quite frankly I couldn't care less if you hate me
Correct me if I'm crazy But if blood is like gravy; thick and amazing
Then how do you call yourself family when you're nowhere to be found lately
I find it simply amazing that when the tough gets going So many get going away
Unwilling to bend and so afraid they might break...For god's sake,

So very Awesome here!
I love this, I agree with Sheila...AMEN!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen, Amen, Amen....oh have I been at the point of feelings as this, asking the questions that are asked in your "pointing the finger in the right direction" write!

The do gooders, the holier than thous, the condemnators aka the exterminators, the "I never did anything like that" persons who just love to judge others but fail to see the plank in their own eye!

You tell it like it is and that is just the way it should be told!

Wonderful insight Cuz!....keep shouting it! Do you think if they look in the mirror they shall not be able to see themselves for all the smoke they have created?

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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