Playing On A Bended Knee/Thanksgiving Prayer #2

in august at .500

Golf's most exclusive

event is golf.

They are as tenacious

and as tough as they come.

Discovering new curves.

Discovering new big game.

They are covered.

On Thanksgiving

we'd get together in

our nicest stuff and we

looked just like the  

champions who kill birds.

Reviews

[Beccy]

It's all a show sometimes. At the club, sporting the right gear, at the dinner table saying the right things.

Excellent! Beccy.

[Baby Ricochet]

Golf is a stupid game.............

[faryn wolff]

THIS ONE THOUGH
I like this one.

[Rene Salinas]

What often seems disjointed proves not be and so...... As the writing does not come with a manual the honorable thing is to have a stab at meaning. The exclusivity of golf which at best discriminates clearly and its gestures of sleight of hand if one wants in order to avoid objects and get to the determined goal. We can slice and drive and put and well so many. So do them relationships exclusively sitting down at one table pretending and while they talk to each other they re enact the same gestures of golf as their words slice and chip and......

So with your cousin use a wedge?


Thankyou

[The Twin Arenas]

you have no idea how satisfying this is. like, satisfying because you guys are getting close and you're there and everything. you're in it and around it. thank you so much for reading this and writing this to me. for a writer, like, discussion is what you want, and all of you give me that. Thanks.

[Rene Salinas]

No probs, you write them I read them and so it continues....

[The Twin Arenas]

ha, I'm such a f*****g loon. just rereading what I wrote up there. have to excuse.

[writing mojo]

I think I get this, "Golf most exclusive event is is Golf " meaning just like holidays are holidays, "Big new game" like hunting is a part of the festivity, covered...and the rest is pretty self explanatory..excellent piece very original..and I like how you tie in a sport played on how many acres of empty feel fields for the big hole in one...eagle or birdie...if I read to much into this piece i am sorry for my brain taking the surreal for literal...It's my nature..again bravo..

[The Twin Arenas]

yep, it's about thanksgiving and golf and a tenacious tough covered "they" champions killing birds all that s**t. yep. Thanks for the read, man. I'll read your stuff, too.

[Lyn Anderson]

Okay, you are killing me with these things. I read this one too. Again, sorry, maybe I am just being obtuse, but I truthfully do not know how to review these incredibly abstract pieces. Give me something, anything that relates to my Thanksgiving, and I might actually get it.

[The Twin Arenas]

it's about thanksgiving. thanks for the read!

[Crusty Pizza Stain]

This reminds me of every Thanksgiving I've ever had. Brilliant write!