The Opposite Was True

The Opposite Was True

A Poem by Waconda Springs
"

the fewtch

"
Smells of smoke
as electric we
can live
again

The problem is that
we are too
verynice people

next:

Time, buddy.

© 2015 Waconda Springs



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sometimes being very nice people can be a bad thing, when it hurts you to be nice, and that can happen, I wonder about this one, it makes me wonder what two very nice people could or would do if they were a little less nice next time.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Waconda Springs

1 Year Ago

Yeah, this is one of the weirdest things I've wrote, I think. Based on phones, mainly. And nicenes.. read more
Nicely put together I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


At first I though verynice was a new word that I didn't know, lol
Amazing piece

Posted 2 Years Ago


I never felt that way about anyone
Never
not once



Posted 2 Years Ago


Waconda Springs

2 Years Ago

you're lucky. thanks for the read.
Maybe in the next life, buddy!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very original and though full :) Even smoke has different sources.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cooking end up pretty bland when nobody want to start a fire.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Waconda Springs

2 Years Ago

bah, this was lazy shite. I hate reading good ideas executed poorly. this is that.
Cory Barrett

2 Years Ago

i have a f**k ton of those
Interesting! Lines maybe not to be crossed...intriguing piece...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very experimental writing. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


We're smelling smoke, because our electric world will burn. And everyone's too damn nice, to do anything about it!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Waconda Springs

Edmonton, Canada



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