Turning On Yellow

Turning On Yellow

A Poem by Waconda Springs

the fewtch

Take two
watching cars,
old broke love

© 2016 Waconda Springs

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we either hesitate with love, or accelerate towards it...i love the Yellow light idea...the caution light...

but do we feel more red because of past loves that didn't work out, or do we feel free to speed towards it.

nicely done ..."less is more"

and you master it here.


Posted 2 Years Ago

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After a breakup all that's left to do is watch cars.

Posted 1 Year Ago

This reminds me of some contemporary art that focuses on short words to build a portrait of people. Simple and sweet but open to a great amount of interpretation all the while leading the reader on a specific visual journey.

These sort of free verse poems are rather hard, but I think that this one has the perfect touch.
Wonderful job!


Posted 1 Year Ago

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Short and sweet but far from simple. This let my mind wander further then most and it took turns that I did not see coming.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I love short poems, so much space left to imagine. This evokes a lot of different images and thoughts in me, like a very short video clip or a vivid memory. Nicely done.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I love how such a short and concise poem can take you to so many places as you contemplate it. This is one for the imagination. Wonderful!

Posted 2 Years Ago

Proceed with caution.
Good little Poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago

The brevity of this speaks so loudly...Jacob is right...less is more :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

Thank you for the read request. As I've said before, I know little about poetry and can offer minimal assistance by reviewing. For me this poem is very enigmatic. Perhaps that's the point. It gives rise to a lot of pondering.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Second chances, stop and go, black and white, sepia photos.

Posted 2 Years Ago

you wrote enough too read too much into it. we all add ours into it & read sooo much; which is true, for most of us. thank you, for putting so many words in something so messy in most of our lives. great write! keep them coming!!!!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on June 2, 2016
Last Updated on June 2, 2016


Waconda Springs
Waconda Springs

Edmonton, Canada

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