Turning On Yellow

Turning On Yellow

A Poem by Waconda Springs
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Take two
watching cars,
old broke love

© 2016 Waconda Springs



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This reminds me of some contemporary art that focuses on short words to build a portrait of people. Simple and sweet but open to a great amount of interpretation all the while leading the reader on a specific visual journey.

These sort of free verse poems are rather hard, but I think that this one has the perfect touch.
Wonderful job!

cheers
-h

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Short and sweet but far from simple. This let my mind wander further then most and it took turns that I did not see coming.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love short poems, so much space left to imagine. This evokes a lot of different images and thoughts in me, like a very short video clip or a vivid memory. Nicely done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love how such a short and concise poem can take you to so many places as you contemplate it. This is one for the imagination. Wonderful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Proceed with caution.
Good little Poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The brevity of this speaks so loudly...Jacob is right...less is more :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Thank you for the read request. As I've said before, I know little about poetry and can offer minimal assistance by reviewing. For me this poem is very enigmatic. Perhaps that's the point. It gives rise to a lot of pondering.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Second chances, stop and go, black and white, sepia photos.

Posted 1 Year Ago


you wrote enough too read too much into it. we all add ours into it & read sooo much; which is true, for most of us. thank you, for putting so many words in something so messy in most of our lives. great write! keep them coming!!!!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Brevity at this level difficult to achieve. Good for you!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Waconda Springs
Waconda Springs

Edmonton, Canada



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